Ah, that was great. :D hot and sweet. Could be more detailed, and the ending felt cut short, but very good all the same. :)

Aw, that was so cute.

Well, he almost won't. So.. Well, I had to read this and the other just to remember it, and just to know that I had already read it. Well, now I have reviewed for this too. And it rock my gran's socks! :D Okay, she's dead, but hell, it sounded kind of cool? xD Cheers.

Omg, that was hot...But, to immidiately put you know, Sirius cock inside without preparing as a first time is more painful rather than pleasurable XD

CUTENESS! Great fic, awseome job!

really awesome. Remus SiriusYUM! very good for a first try. having never written anything smutty myself, i doubt i could give you any advice that would be helpful. i enjoyed reading this though!

Your first smut scene, huh? Well, the dialogue was extremely hot! The actual descriptions weren't detailed enough. Draw out the scene. Describe how hot their skin feels, where their hands hold onto each other, and certainly make them touch and kiss more before they climax. All in all, it was fairly good, especially for your first.

I'm speechless...

WEird, right? I'm never speechless...I just don't know what to think...it's great but...*runs away in confusion*

Love you.

I loved it ! It was very funny and sexy ! :D

"You haven't tasted all of me yet, Sirius."

"If he's this excited every time, I'll have choked to death before I'm 20, Sirius mused."

Those lines made me laugh a lot !