Ooh! I loved it! *whimpers*sighs* Dang... my favorite pairing... and they both died... heh, no offense, but glad this didn't happen. :P Just would have made that scene even worse for me to watch...

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...(reads what she wrote
Eh... I sound like a fanatic... Well, putting that aside, great job! I totally loved it!

*sobs* and she dies, he dies and he didn't knmow he was a daddy oh how sad it was lovely

Wow! Im also stunned by this story of yours!

I really wish, that there had been a romance between Jane and Neil; at least a little confession or a happy ending for the both of them. Your story did this and Im really surprised by how good it was written.

Go on and write more!

Who would DARE flame this? This was TOO incredible! You stun me, you know. This was...wow. I...this is a possibility I never thought could..well, you know, Jane and Neil, you know something happened once. People don't always just "joke". You know? This was great, and I look forward to reading more of your stories, which I'm about to do within a matter of minutes.

Hey, did you say "possible future story"? That would be good.. that would be VERY good...
And personally, I think you've got a good idea here... I wonder what Jane and Neil's daughter would be like?

*sniff, sniff* wow, that fic really makes the scene where jane and neil die sad. I mean, sadder. I'l be on the lookout for more fics by you in the future... hint, hint.

goodness... how about a continuation? or maybe write another janeneil fic? pleeeeeeeeaase?

That was great! Beautiful! I loved the ending, it was so bitter-sweet.

Hey ! Why don't you be a little more confident ? No one would flame you ! Anyway, that's a very nice story you have there ! The idea was really original too ! Make more fics will you ?)

! I LOVE Jane and Neil stories!

Didn't get a chance to review this last night, so I'm doing it now. Very beautiful fic, I loved it. But really sad too, because he'll never know since everyone kinda like...dies. *sniff* Very well written! Please continue writing and don't worry about flames. Flamers are idiots who have no life and have no confidence in their own writing. Don't listen to them because your writing is great!

I feel kinda dumb reviewing my own story, but I wanted to address something said earlier. The only reason I named her Theresa is so that she can go by the nickname Reese later, when she's a confident military type in a potential future story. I had to write this fic; I wanted to think that at least a part of Jane and Neil lived on. And remember, Jane named her BEFORE the Neil Jr thing.

Why would I flame? Jane and Neil were the best part of the movie! Aki and Grey who? Anyways, it was a great fic! Please write more of something soon!

Yeah, those two always gave me the impression that they'd slept together before. But I would have given the daughter a better name. You know how Neil says he wants a "Neil Jr.?" Well if it's a girl, her name would be something like... Nili. That's such a cool name. I read it in a 'zine somewhere, believe it or not.

Now, the people who know me well enough know what I want !

Brilliant
I still stand by what I said about your writing abilities in the club though...