You're an original writer, beautiful.

it sucks

I love you for writing this. BEST. POEM. EVER.

neat :)

Heya! It's Venom. FFNet won't let me log in, so I'm posting this here. Hope you don't mind.

Anyways, all I have to say is AWESOME! This one of the best rhyme schemes in any poem I've ever seen! The rhythm is top-nothc and the poem just flows like water! This is incredible! I could never hope to do anything like this!

I'm faving this when I get the chance to log in.