ahhhhhhhh! please more? more loveliness? please please? more hugs and kisses? please?

hi! i'm back! i actually finish up to chapter 4, not chapter 2 before i stop! gomen!

actually the reason why i stopped reading this before id because umm... it's too emotionally written... drama i mean...lol... and i'm not that very fond of drama you know? (which puzzles me coz i myself infuses drama inm y own fic... angst, hurt, tragedy, DRAMA, blood violence... stuffs like that) and i recently reading quite a lot of fics that falls in that categories and enjoying it... *heck! i think i hit my head somewhere... what's happening to me?* haha...but this pass few days they're making my mood in the gloom...

first... i like your writing style, the first person point of view... which is one of your strong points... it makes the reader umm... one with the character.. and*what do you call that? ahh yeah!* more real... and a touch of reality is always a plus factor ne?

but i also notice that some of the characters were quite OOC... (kurama and hiei and mukuro) though you manage to keep it to the minimum level so it's actually fine...

lets discuss my favorite scene
Mukuro? kneeling beside the bed with hand over hiei's bare chest? ugh... i could hardy imagine... Mukuro's the toughest girl (if not the touchest character) in both manga and anime...(more like master genkai) but since like i said you manage it to the minimal level and in the right palce at the right time... it actually became for me the most markable scene!

yeah... it is the one that leaves the most mark... starts from when kurama enters the room witnessing that moment of tenderness between the two 'til she step out of the room? wow! that scene could win an oscar! you manage to create an intensifying scene without using many words or i mean dialogs between characters... only mukuro speaks during that whole scene right? that's a wow!it is really striking and it clears a lot of questions without much explanation... which reminds me... the way mukuro say "he've grown ne?" could be interpreted as she loves hiei that way or in motherly way or both ne? then the way she walked out of the room after leaving an order to kurama? it draws me to conclusion that that though she've given up to hiei either that way or both doesn't necessarily means she favors kurama but she can't do anything than that... she admitted that she 's not able to pass the barrier of hiei ne? but she knows that kurama could or would do? you amazingly manage to convey conflicting message by describing the actions instead of by dialogues... BRAVO TO YOU!

to hiei, (that infuriating coward of a paradox!) i mean... how could he be so mean! hah! i really love the fact that you show us his thoughts for if not... i'm sure i won't understand his action! heheh... afraid to be hurt so chooses to hurt the one he love which in the end hurt him as well! heheh... i can actually relate to hiei's internal struggle coz i myself afraid to let my walls down... (i'm more like hiei than kurama, maybe that's why i'm so in love with the fox! lol..) denies the truth even if it's right under his nose! heheh.. how could he be so blind when he has three eyes! heck!... but i love hiei that cold, indifferent bastard...

kurama! uhg... he's super OOC here! but umm tolerable enough... ooh! though i must admit that that's exactly the reason i stopped reading it before... does love always go hand in hand with stupidity? i mean... i'm not into those people saying "it's okay, because i love him"i'm willing to wait/ i'm waiting" lines like that? i mean some of my friends were like that and i actually want to bang their heads in the wall to wake them up! lol *sorry kinda carried away!
those willing to endure and constantly going in to pain over and over again because of that damn ningen weakness called love! lol... *Nah! honestly though i hate those people i also admire them in the deepest part of my heart coz they have the courage to go through and continue despite their bruises and wounds... an honorable, stupid warrior of love! honorable but still, STUPID... i made myself clear right? heheh
that's why i'm genuinely glad that kurama never gave up on hiei (that stubborn fire demon!)...hehe..
well as they said... to love, one must endure pain...the more you love, the more you hurt, but love is so great that it worth the pain...

ugh! *hey is that me? am i becoming a romantic fool?... inari! what's happering to me?
i hope to see the end of this story... i've notice you've not updated it for quite sometimes... i really hope you won't leave us hanging like that ne?

jya ne?

lotta loves and kisses,

adah!

hhaah.. i rememmber this... i have read the first two chapter but stop there and didn't comment... why? oh gush! i am so hurt when Hiei rejected Kurama THAT WAY! i mean... how mean! but then after sometimes, i looked for this story again(i'm such a jerk i didn't even try to remember the title nor the author...how bad! gomen!) and yeah dince i do not remember the title nor the author... i have forgotten it but...horray! we've meet again! i'll finish it now...heheh...

comments later!

OMG, please don't tell me you're not going to finish this! You. Can't. DO. THAT! Writing such fantastic stories like this and then... just... I don't know, NOT writing more, no, no, no! This is the only story that I've cried in every chapter of, it's so sad and beautiful... PLEASE COME BACK TO FINISH THIS! I BEG OF YOU!

ah.. when are you gonna update?

Update!

great story! some of it made me cry!PLEASE UPDATE SOON

It was really good... so update soon please!

Hey! how come you still haven't continued this? you know, this fic affected me so much... that sometimes when I'm in the bus or if I'm not doing anything, I'll just think of the scene where Hie says 'I hate you' and I just want to cry! Please continue this... everyone is dying to read the next chapter!

Oh, and if somehow I haven't answered your question yet, yes... I was the one who wrote 'realizations'... doushite? was it that bad?
Please continue!

Saa, how cute Kurama is so forgiving and loving and... yeah .; I really like this story I read it a while back maybe a few months ago? I'm embarassed to say I forgot about it and upon reading another story that suggested reading THIS story, I found it again. I was surprised when the first paragraph was so vaguely familiar and I realized I'd of read it before. Its so much more amazing the second time I'm sad it looks discontiued I hope Mukuro isn't eating the table out of impatience, 'cause they sure are taking a while (though, it IS kind of important, ne?) Anywho, keep up the good work

Hey! How long are you gonna have us wait for the next chapter? I"ve been keeping track of this for so long already and i haver reviewed a few times anonymously but it HAS BEEN DECADES! PLEASE UPDATE!

Hey! I think I read this before, but it could just be my memory is failing me... o.O Anyway, It was a very good story, but it doesn't seem quite completed. And there is that little 'to be continued' comment at the end of the chapter _ It doesn't sound like you have more than one or maybe two chapters...so...even though it's been almost two years since the last update...would you please finish this story? *puppy dog eyes* It's hard to find really well written stories such as this one, I'd appreciate it so much!:n.n And if it is not too much trouble could you please contact me on whether you will be continuing this story or not? My e-mail i -just remove the spaces. D Thanks a bunch! I hope to hear from you soon! P

Onegai...haiyaku with the next chappie...oh, and since you and Kurama-chan are getting on each other's nerves, i can take him off your hands sometime, it will be no problem at all...the problem will be getting him back...(evel smirk) I happen to be a very BIG Kurama/Hiei fan and i really like what you've done to them in your fics...although i still think that 'The Question' was a little harsh on my Kurama-chan...uhm, i mean Kurama- san...ehehehe...anyway keep up the good work!

This is really good. Are you planning on continueing it? I absolutly love this story. Update soon please.

DON'T BE DEAD, DARNIT! WE NEED CHAPTER EIGHT!

Well...you've only been gone for a year. Some of us may be getting a tad impatient.
Unless, of course, you are dead. In which case this probably won't do much good.

ANYWAYS, now that that's over with, allow me to say how FRIKKIN' GOOD this story is: it's frikkin' good. I mean it. (And I thought I liked the short stories...oi!) Hence, the caps-lock impatience up there.(Believe me, I'm on very good terms with procrastination, so I'm probably a bit of a hypocrite, but oh well. Until you go and get yourself exhumed, or something, we rabid reviewers and our run-on sentences of caps-lock-y DOOM probably won't go anywhere.
Um...so there.