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Not so bubbly fingers
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
Ah, as I wait for your next chapter I'm going through your other stories. :'D


Btw, I just saw one of your reviews and SWEET JEBUS Xemnas rearranged really IS Man Sex. Gah, that really got me going. And yes I definitely felt the fluffiness of the story. I just wished I hadn't eating so much sweets today because now I feel kind of...sick. Dx
Kive
2008-12-04 . chapter 1
That's so sweet!! .. Why can't I have someone like that, why?! lol
*checks spelling* lol I've been reviewing some of you stories' chapters and after I post them I realize that I'm either way too excited or just ..I don't know ..stupid? and write the most incoherent things xD sorry about that, and I know I make like 1230978 spelling mistakes in a 10 word sentence so... hmm sorry. ^-^ I love you stories though...
vamprincessmiyu
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
That was adorable!
It made my day about 80% better!
Thank you for writing such a cute story.
13loves8loves9loves6
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
*swoon* hahahhaha aw how cute~!! >w
Kupo3.0
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
aw
liked it a lot in the beginning
the ending was a bit too cheesy though
well written in general though
amber-firetongue
2008-03-14 . chapter 1
aww... so fluffy.
FlamingDoritos
2008-03-14 . chapter 1
Aw, how sickeningly cute! Nah, I'm kidding! I'm not a Valentine's Day fan but I'll still be all huggy and lovey with anyone who holds still long enough. :P Fantastic, of course, minus the rose of evilness that's trying to eat Roxie. That isn't allowed.

...I gotta go work on my PROJECT for ENGLISH! SEEYA WHENEVER!
Mr. Apocalypse
2008-03-14 . chapter 1
Yes, I am everywhere on your reviews, mwaahhaha!

Anyway...

Aww! So fluffy! I love it! Personally, I'm not much for Valentines Day either, but it sure does make for one hell of a good story basis. This was horribly, sickeningly cute. Not to mention adorably corny (not saying it's bad). I really enjoy your writing style, as I've probably said before, but I really do.

Keep up the great work!
MrSpoonLovesYou
2008-03-08 . chapter 1
Gackk, that was soo cute XD

Well Done!
Michele-bell
2008-03-06 . chapter 1
Aw! I absolutely loved it! I share yours and Roxas's feelings on Valentines Day. Stupid Singles Awareness day! This was so cute though. Great job ^^
calmxbeforexthexstorm
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
That was great :) I liked the heart concept. And the roses haha
Arkaham
2008-02-19 . chapter 1
this is... so cute
beautiful and... terrible romantic

I love it^^
sana-chan9
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
AW!

KAWAI

HAPPY (belated) VALENTINE'S DAY!!

tuesdayshoes
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Can I have your metaphorical babies pl0x? :]

That was gorgeous. I especially loved the last bit, 'And their shared heart was complete'. It was really touching.

Perhaps you should write more AkuRoku... ;3
-PPH
Chiba.Kun
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
Aw, so cute~! You wrote this out really well.
One thing, though, You spelled 'Xemnas' wrong. Not a Z, and X. I'll spare you the Axel quote. Other than that, I'm not sure what else to say except that I'm amazed. Great job!
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