Yeah, I'm reviewing this really late. I caught a case of BK nostalgia and decided to look through some of the old fics. This was interesting to say the least, especially since Fadroh is a character I keep forgetting about, and even when I remember him it's as the boss with the crotch laser. So, assuming the last bit is a recollection rather than a fantasy, Mel sure gets around a lot, yeah? If you were still as active I'd request a sort of biographical fic about her, because it would no doubt be fascinating.

Beautiful. You've done it again, Fan.

Wow! Is this for Valentines day? It was great!
I guess I would feel the same IF someone passed me a note or something... haha!
Oh! What did "end magnus" meant? I would like to know!
Other than that, GREAT work!-MokonaM.