This was so sweet. The gifts were great- especially the roses with the Star of David!

Yayness! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it! It makes me feel so happy i could scream and all that! Keep up the great writing!

Well i did like Gibbs acting like he was zivas father. I definately liked that part when he and Tony spoke in that "dont you hurt her scene"...because thats the meaning i get from that scene. Gibbs not telling Ziva was a good scene also...it was like a father talking to his daughter and i think it was good for him too...since he could never do this for his daughter. Hell Tony knows he is in trouble should he hurt her.

This were in my opinion the strongest scenes of the story.

The fight was good also...those who you love have the potential to hurt you the most...not to go all depressed on it but its unfortunately a fact.

The driving scene was funny...ziva is just road rage...

Hmm rule 12 was "Never date a co-worker wasnt it?

LOVED IT!

OMG OMG OMG THAT WAS SO CUTEI TOTALLY LOVE IT!

great :P

Aw! That was so cute I think I just got cavaties. It was completely adorable and in-character enough to be believable. The only thing that would make it even better is to put a little mark whenever the point-of-view changes. It was a bit confusing at first. Luna

I really, really enjoyed this story. I can actually see them getting together along these lines.

Wonderful.

OMG! that was awesome!

NAW

two of my favourite authors... great job guys! I love how this oneshot wasn't too short. this was so good! well done!

great job and happy valentines day!

xox Mel

That was a nice story. I think it was just romantic enough without being sappy.

Love it! I squeal with delight at Tony and Ziva! Thanks so much for the lovely valentine's day fic! it made me smile!

That was adorable! Just made my Valentine's Day!