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Anon 12/21/09 . chapter 1
That was hysterical! I couldn't stop laughing. Cute ending too.)
SherryBird 10/20/08 . chapter 1
I love comedies like this! It really brights up my boring school days)
supernatural demon hunter 4/4/08 . chapter 1
this is so cool.i was laughing when mystel dropped the water bomb on bryan.
Destiny Kitty 3/3/08 . chapter 1
Ooh, Mystel had better watch out. He's practically small enough to fit in a microwave XD And Miguel totally has Kai in the palm of his hands, hm? I guess all the Russians probably need someone to lighten them up. Enrique is funny he gets made out as such a loose lover. Honestly this is a funny couple, Mystel and Bryan, because of the size difference, but I guess Bryan has to respect him a bit for having the balls to disturb his sleep. Sounds like they'll enjoy each other. At least Mystel will, with those fantasies...
Des
Kissing Serendipity 2/18/08 . chapter 1
Oh this is too cute.

Slightly odd pairing, but it worked out.

Adorable. :D
Ikustizen 2/16/08 . chapter 1
I LOVE YOU! The first ByranxMystel of the lot! I love this! I can just imagine Mystel doing something like that and Bryan's reaction! The vision of Bryan posing like that makes me laugh so hard!*hugs you
I love you! (Meh, I admit, I'm hyper and happy*starts to hyperventilate because of fanfictions greatness Nezi
Ma.anda 2/15/08 . chapter 1
woah talk about a odd pairing. but it was HILARIUOS omg I can so totally see bryan sleeping with mystel holding a waterbaloon over his head.

Manda
Blaze Queenie 2/15/08 . chapter 1
KAWAII! X3 X3 X3 I love this ficcie, Mystel is so cute. X3 LOL Bryan getting hit by a water bomb! Ah I love messing with Bryan don't you.
Bryan: Hey!

Me: Awh Bryan want a cracker? *pats Bryan on head and shows him cracker
Bryan -_ I don't know her *walks away
Me: Bry! Get your ass back here *runs after him, Bryan running to get away
X3 Update or create soon! Neh!

Big Hugs

Blaze Queenie
psychedelia 2/15/08 . chapter 1
LOL... wonder how you got that vision ...

Fab story as always ...
Winter-Rae 2/15/08 . chapter 1
AHAHAHA!

That was too great.

Reading this made my day. Poor Bryan but the thought of someone doing that to him is still so hilarious! I loved it.

Silly Mystel he is such a cutie. I love him to pieces!

I laughed so hard a tthe mention of Bryan as an action hero, all I could picture is him in the Die Hard movies (love those movies).

Wonderful work all in all. A cute pairing too.

Keep up the awesome work!

Much love, talk to you later!

Winter-Rae xoxoxo
Thegoldenlock 2/15/08 . chapter 1
hahaha great!

I was nearly laughing at the schene that bryan was in that hero pose! I mean that would look...strange?
This was really cute and I like the odd pairing alot. the curse of blondes.. to bad Im dark haired. And do not have blue eyes *curses
nice work and good luck on you future projects!
glitteredvixen06 2/14/08 . chapter 1
Can't seem to log in...ah well, least I can still review this beauty of a fic!

Almost died from the sheer cuteness of it all...and it's a new pairing to! Bryan and Mystel...would never of have thought of it.
I always feel somewhat stupid for asking other authors to write a fic, but do you think it's possible to write a JohnnyxEnrique and/or Garland/Mystel? If no, then that's okay but if yes...well you get the idea. Once again, great fic!
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