-blushes furiously-

Oh... my... gosh.

That is...

That is...

Katsuro said...?

Hanami did what now...?

IT IS SO IN CHARACTER OH MY GOSH I LOVE YOU.

You've captured their characters amazingly well. Katsuro is a total teasing jerk sometimes but he likes zeh laidez, and Hanami is a bit of a sassy little chit.

I give you two thumbs up of utter youth!

Oh my gosh. Oh, Neji, if you ever found out... XD

I can see Katsuonow, up in heaven: "THAT'S MAH BOY!"

And when Neji finds out:

Here lies Katsuro Torakiba
Lady killer extraordinair
Too bad he wasn't a father killer
The father killed him.

oh this is so cute nice story