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Reviews for: What you deserve
Clare-stovold
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
Aww! That was so cute! (Huggles Ken)
Mirabelle456
2008-03-25 . chapter 1
Very cute. I loved it. You might want to watch your tenses, however. I'm not saying you have to, but there was one section in there,

"Whatever he said, whether it was the right or wrong answer, it made her start to cry even more. She wrapped her arms around her stomach and cried into her knees. [It’s been days since they talked] and he didn’t know if he was stepping over any boundaries by wrapping his arm around her and trying to comfort her."

The part that I put [] around has two verb tenses in one sentence. Don't feel offended, I'm a spelling/grammar nut who comments on said two subjects every time I review.

I enjoyed the fic however. Kenyako... such a cute couple!
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