This was so sweet! I've always wondered what the story would have seemed like through Hermione's eyes. Keep writing things like this!

This is great! You went through the different stages, so nice.

aww this was a really cute story! i loved it, great job!

Kristi

Straight-up fantastic.

I liked this story very much.

I am a picky reader and this was definitely deserves a four-star review.

Your imagery and the use of the short passages evoked a fitting mood; I also enjoyed the little hints of actual text. You captured Hermione's character very well.

At the risk of repeating myself-this was a FANTASTIC story.

that was beautiful. i Loved it!

That was really amazing. I have goosebumps and am crying amazing, nice work!

that touched my heart! so amazing!

this was very good!

i liked how you did different steps in her life. i especially liked the one where it mentioned that they had become friends when she had almost died and it began again when he almost did.

the end was very nice as well.

great job!

I LOVE it!

You went through their entire relationship, showing how it changed and evolved.

It was really beautiful and touching!

Definietely on my fav's list!