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eltf177
2008-11-26 . chapter 23
A very nice wrapup to this story. Thanks and looking forward to your next one.
cmanuk
2008-05-28 . chapter 22
Aw! It was sad that Daria and Robert got seperated like that. I know Robert got his family back, and Daria might end up with the Robert of her world, but its still kinda sad.

You can almost feel sorry for Dr Stone. Probably better to be dead than to live as zombie bait.
eltf177
2008-05-27 . chapter 22
Never occurred to me that Stone would still be alive after the MIB fixed the timeline. Most interesting!
eltf177
2008-05-23 . chapter 21
Great chapter, I was so hoping Daria would meet our Robert, she really needs a 'happily ever after' ending!

Looking forward to the next update!
nabikineum
2008-05-21 . chapter 21
Well Epilogues, yay!

Maybe a little /too/ neatly tied so far, but I have to say that a happy is better than an empty almost any day.
eltf177
2008-05-16 . chapter 20
Sorry for jumping the gun, never thought about epilogues.

Very interesting and a nice wrap up. I guess next we'll get one from Daria's POV and then maybe one from the MIB?
Doggieboy80
2008-05-13 . chapter 19
Just to let everyone know, this story isn't quite done yet. There are at least three epilogues to it (maybe more - I haven't decided yet.)
Thanks to my readers who followed along. I appreciate it. More to come.
nabikineum
2008-05-13 . chapter 19
Oh, geez... I hate those Twilight Zone/Hitchcock endings-- and I love them.

Good story. Thanks for it. You have a great 'voice.' Any chance of a sequel to take a way the 'but... but... and it's over?' feeling?

If not, that's cool, because like I said love/hate.
eltf177
2008-05-13 . chapter 19
Wow, quite an ending! Took me by surprise!

Looking forward to your next story!
cmanuk
2008-05-11 . chapter 18
An awesome story. It almost felt like the story had gone flat now that Daria and Robert are safely out of the undead's reach, but it looks like things are about to get interesting again.

I love the idea of Daria being a fictional character in Roberts world and vice versa.

Hope you update soon :)
eltf177
2008-05-05 . chapter 18
Another great chapter. Funny, I'd have figured Helen to be the calm one and Jake the one to lose it. The video bit was quite an eye-opener...

And now the men-in-black. Update soon, we need to know (even though the government doesn't want us to!).
eltf177
2008-04-24 . chapter 17
Very nice update. Of course, Robert's in for the interrogation of a lifetime!

Update soon!
eltf177
2008-04-11 . chapter 16
Wonderful chapter, Helen took that a _lot_ better than I'd have thought (of course, there's still Jake...). And the Quinn babysitter joke is priceless!

Please update soon!
nabikineum
2008-04-06 . chapter 13
I honestly didn't think I'd like this story, because it sounded a little too far out for a serious Daria fic. You won me over and changed my mind. I really enjoy the parts with Jane getting a touch brutal-- and I surprise myself with how easily I can go along imaging her getting that way-- Jane and Trent are really in character doing fairly unimaginable things... Thanks and keep up the good work.
eltf177
2008-04-06 . chapter 15
Wow, nice wrap up! Hopefully Robert will survive Helen and Jake...

Please update soon!
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