Oh, dear oh, dear. If I was in Natsuki's place: Shizuru - okay, everythings normal, Nao appears - right, thats not surprising, Mai appears - o_o You too? Miss Maria - WHF?! -Faints-

This story is amazing! When I first saw it I couldn't stop lauging! Its hilarious! I bow down to you, have a cookie -randomly throws cookies everywhere-

;D That doesnt sound too bad...
Well, if it were the younger Miss Maria that is.
What I'd do:
"YES MA'AM!" -practically skips over to her and cuddles up to her chest while she growls in anger and excitement-

Dear God! Dear GOD...! I was nearly fainting, whew that was close. My internal thoughts were something like this:

"Hmm, meh well ok so Nao joins the mix, thats different...">

"Wow, uh, Mai too?!! Well authors can do what they want, this is getting creepy tho..." > "MISS MARIA!?"... *CRINGE*

Nearly had a heart attack there -.-

ROFLOOLMAOO!! Miss MARIA?! LMFAO!!
Oh god, you're a genius! You got me raising my eyebrows, widening my eyes, and then slumped over my desk while laughing insanely and clutching my stomach. XD

Ara...I know someone who will say that Miss Maria in that naked group is awesome and sexy! hahahaha, but yeah...Miss Maria in wild, grouped, late night, kinky whatever is really funny. The image of a naked Natsuki tied down surrounded by the naked females with a naked grinning Miss Maria at the foot of the bed, hands akimbo and giving instructions is really funny...and kinky.

wink-wink ;)

OH GOD! LOL! I loved it. I had to stop and take it in for a minute when I read Miss Maria's name! XDD Great job!

Haha that's classic! I kinda let out this muffled laugh with a 'pfft' sound along with it lol, just thought I'd let you know my reaction and gauge from it what I felt about the fic (Truly I am bad at describing in words exactly how I feel, other than the easy "I like" or "I don't like" hehe). Anyway this "I like" :D

Oh, the horror, THE HORROR! I feel kinda bad for Natsuki there. Had the playgirl thing goin' on, and then Miss Maria had to show up... naked. It's one thing if she's materialized, another one if she's not. Though she has Shizuru to make her all better. ^^ hehe

Hi, nice work!
i couldn't get a message to send so i have to talk in reviews.
ive seen u on youtube. I'm Rain141, both on here and youtube. i like your style keep up the good work and help give us shiznat writers a good name!!
-Zee

Olivia U. L.:

You're REAL GENIUS!

For the love of everything sacred and LIFE.. Never ever mention a NAKED 'OLD' Miss Maria.. It'll ruin the natural balance.. Although I would not mind it if she had just materialized.. heh XD

*dead from all laughter and choking on air*

All those lovely young women in Natsuki's bed, but she's up and dressed EARLY. Natsuki Kruger is even dull in her dreams.

I wouldn't mind Miss Maria in my bed AFTER she's materialized. The BEFORE version would definitely be the stuff nightmares are made of, although a friend of mine has an ex-lover who reminds me of the BEFORE Miss Maria (shudders).

Oh my God :D It's about time that you got something up ;) Yay~ Let me just say... I did NOT see the Miss Maria part coming up T_T semi-traumatized me there... had a bad image. Happy (belated) Valentine's Day. I certainly laughed XD. Hope you continue writing =)

Dear God!
Sees naked Shizuru, wags tail happily
sees naked Nao, nearly faints from a nosebleed
sees naked Mai, jumps in bed with them,
sees Maria...nearly dies of fright, sees Maria naked and threatening to punish the Principal...dies due to terror