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Cuenta
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
I really like how you connect each of the colors of the roses in each drabble. It fits and I like your unofficial ending to Tsubasa Chronicle.

Corrections:

"You must've seen so many plants on all your journey's!" It's journeys.

"Fay persisted, tripping over the debris of main room, which was in the process of being refurbished into a cafe." I believe "the" should be between of and main.

"Fay smiled widely, looking up at Kurogane, who smirked at him and gazed down at his mis colored, blue-and-gold eyes." Shouldn't it be miscolored (or mis-colored)?

"Son's take after their father's." Shouldn't it be sons and fathers?

"She looked up, only to ind herself much closer to Syaoran." It's find.
kuroxfaixlover
2008-02-16 . chapter 1
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT X3
ZackMcdohl
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
honestly,i actually really liked this fic.
Good job on being able to incorporate different roses into different scenarios. Great job!
Shunatsu
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Aw! Me likey! Nice~
Thetalkingsockmonkey
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
So cute!
parma-violets
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Gorgeous. Very well written, and you've chosen a fantastic theme! Each drabble can stand alone, but they link in brilliantly with each other - I love your technique of boldening the colour and the meaning. Plus you've varied the content and the characters excellently. Really original - I loved it! Good job!

parma-violets x
Rehime
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Er...

WOW.

That is all I can say. What a powerful ending, and what a powerful theme to go with.

Thank you for your compliments -- I'm so glad I can be an inspiration to your own amazing work.

Nice work.
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