 Cuenta 2009-03-01 . chapter 1I really like how you connect each of the colors of the roses in each drabble. It fits and I like your unofficial ending to Tsubasa Chronicle.
Corrections:
"You must've seen so many plants on all your journey's!" It's journeys.
"Fay persisted, tripping over the debris of main room, which was in the process of being refurbished into a cafe." I believe "the" should be between of and main.
"Fay smiled widely, looking up at Kurogane, who smirked at him and gazed down at his mis colored, blue-and-gold eyes." Shouldn't it be miscolored (or mis-colored)?
"Son's take after their father's." Shouldn't it be sons and fathers?
"She looked up, only to ind herself much closer to Syaoran." It's find. |
 kuroxfaixlover 2008-02-16 . chapter 1LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT X3 |
 ZackMcdohl 2008-02-15 . chapter 1honestly,i actually really liked this fic.
Good job on being able to incorporate different roses into different scenarios. Great job! |
 Shunatsu 2008-02-15 . chapter 1Aw! Me likey! Nice~ |
 Thetalkingsockmonkey 2008-02-15 . chapter 1So cute! |
 parma-violets 2008-02-15 . chapter 1Gorgeous. Very well written, and you've chosen a fantastic theme! Each drabble can stand alone, but they link in brilliantly with each other - I love your technique of boldening the colour and the meaning. Plus you've varied the content and the characters excellently. Really original - I loved it! Good job!
parma-violets x |
 Rehime 2008-02-15 . chapter 1Er...
WOW.
That is all I can say. What a powerful ending, and what a powerful theme to go with.
Thank you for your compliments -- I'm so glad I can be an inspiration to your own amazing work.
Nice work. |