Reviews for And the Walls Came Tumbling Down

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Rowlingfan 2008-07-22 ch 1,	abuseI noticed that you don't like people to add your stories as favorites without telling you why, so I'll just tell you how I feel as of chapter 8. Your story is very good, I don't think there's much of anything there that needs critiquing (your action is fine!). Your characterizations are accurate. The only thing I can think of is the bolding, but that's just me and I think it's actually a good way of showing non-English language. I'm really enjoying your story and thanks for writing it.
waves2622 2008-07-21 ch 8,	abuseI really liked how you fit speedy's comic past in with his TV show past! im gonna tell your story if my friend erin ever asks about his past (but probably without the drug part, because she didnt know what any of the mature stuff about raven meant) I LOVE Jerico and im glad to see people writing stories about him.
Aki and Tenshi 2008-07-16 ch 8,	abuseCool story. You're really delving into the characters and setting up an interesting plot. update soon. -Aki
PhantomGirl12 2008-07-09 ch 8,	abusePLEASE UPDATE! I'll try to stick it out untill you update. I'm not sure I can make it though! Anyway, It's awsome!
Dawnmist 11 2008-06-15 ch 8,	abuseWow, this is awesome! Please, please update soon, I can't wait to see where this leads too! Great job and good luck!
Matt the Batman Fan 2008-06-10 ch 8,	abuseHeh, heh. Well, I'll have you know that I do appreciate the effort you put into writing a chapter this long and it's clear you put a lot of effort into it. I know that Roy is one of your favorite characters and I know you wanted to make sure that you got it right. I've always harbored a bit of disgust for Ollie when it comes to him and Roy and you did a good job of reminding why I dislike him for it. The "I taught you better than that" was very much something that Ollie would say. My only real quibble with the whole thing was that Dinah was not involved but I can understand why you went at it the way you did. One other thing, is there any chance that we can see more of how Jericho responds to his teammates telling their stories? After all, he is the central character and the other characters are basically doing this for his benefit. Still, this was a very good chapter and I hope to read more soon.
Lady Dragon010 2008-06-09 ch 8,	abusethis was asome. Please continue.(Aqua Girl)
ALLpraiseb2Him 2008-06-07 ch 8,	abuseWAHOO! You updated! I loved the chapter, it was very well written, considering the fact that you had to make some of Speedy's past up, and make sure it works with the rest of his past, his present character, etc. Bummer. Cartoon Network and Warner Bros. have destroyed our fandom. They cancelled Teen Titans, they cancelled Teen Titans Go! (the comics based off the show), they made us take Teen Titans off of YouTube, and they messed up several awesome characters! What the heck?! WAHOO! Can't wait for.. well, actually, I am still 100% excited about your story. I can't wait to hear your take on Aqualad's history! And, by the way, I think your rating is fine, at least for now!
Shiva the Sarcastic 2008-06-06 ch 8,	abuseWonderful chapter. I like how you bring in comic book history of the characters. However, why didn't you mention Green Lantern? he was there with Green Arrow on his journey of self-discovery. Anyway, great chapter.
The All Real Numbers Symbol 2008-06-06 ch 8,	abuseI dunno, I didn't think this was to bad. If what you said up there hold true, though, I don't htink I'll appreciate the later chapters, though. I guess I'll find out as we go. L8R! -The All Real Numbers Symbol
Madam Moony 2008-06-06 ch 8,	abuseAwesome chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter on Aqualad. -Hannah
PenetratingBlackEyes 2008-06-06 ch 8,	abuseAh, I guess I see why this is necessary, but I know all the backgrounds...although I guess it's pretty intersting in terms of how you'll work them into what's happened in the cartoon. Anyway, have you been reading Final Crisis!?! Damn Grant Morrison! Has much as I love him...the evil bastard...cries
Kairikiani 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuseThis is honestly the best Jericho fanfiction I've read so far in terms of characterization, plot, and...well, pretty much everything.
Matt the Batman Fan 2008-05-24 ch 7,	abuseWell, looks to me that Jericho's discretion about Slade may eventually bite the Titans East in the collective keister. . . You've done a good job setting up Jericho and the conflict he has to face as he works with a new team. By keeping himself between his past and his present, you've set yourself up with a nice bit of conflict that you've been building upon for the last few chapters. Good work! The Titans East revealing their pasts seems like a pretty good idea. A word of advice though. . . when you get to that point, be sure to take some time to shine the spotlight on each of the characters as they respond to everyone else's stories. Not only will this add to the meat of the story but it will also form a solid connection between the characters, which is something that I've found a wee bit lacking in the last few chapters. That being said. . . look at all these reviews you're gettin'! Can I borrow some of yours :-0. Good work and happy writing.
PenetratingBlackEyes 2008-05-23 ch 7,	abuseOkay, I've given up. I'm just gonna wait and find out who has the black hair. I guess it'll be interesting to have your take on how the Titans East came together. What's pretty interesting, is even though Mas y Menos were made up for the cartoon, they made a small appearance in the one of the comics. And I'm not talking the cartoon one...anyway, good chapter. Update as soon as possible! Later.

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