really good! and it made me think of the pat benatar song, which also has the same name. keep these up!

-luna

Okay This was one Heckuva story and the end was HILARIOUS!(The part where Cynder found out Spyro knew the whole time)

Keep up the good writing :)

God bless,
Crocluva95

If I was there scorch would be toast! Or Ice, more like it.

nice story... i hate scorch dont you? i think everyone does... except scorch... lol

I love it and love is a battlefeild

you are always a good writer...no matter what
~the dragon of the Hill~

hey hey hey, i'm back again! well since this is going to be a long night for me, i decided to see what you had, and came across this in my research...not exactly what i was looking for, but still effective. well done and keep it up!

That's all i got, Laters! --Ryft

Awesome!

Truely amazing! Your writing is great, some of the best I've seen on this site. Keep it up!

Yes that would be me slitting the throat of the ** stupid enough to touch my Spyro. :)

This is a funny yet serious story. Well done pal. Keep the work going.

Can't believe that I hadn't read this yet. It's on-par with SoC, and that is a very good thing! Keep writing and keep up the good work!

Nice job. I will be waiting for Ch3 to come out

Funny, cute and romantic. I like that style. :D That was nice RedDragonx. :) I use those styles too in Soyro and Enrico fanfiction.

sweet oneshot man! one of the best I've ever read. hope to see more from you soon!