Bravo! Brilliant! Super! Can't say anything that isn't a compliment.

Yay for cynical Cyril

this is pretty cool, you really should do more one shots showing Scorch causing trouble... oh! wait! What about Scorch's

back-story... like what made him such a jerk!

Well here, in short, is a little part that my best character, Sulfer, would do in this situation. Taking Terradon's place.

Schorch was no Mach for the brute strenth of Sulfer. The 8 foot tall dragon attacked nonstop and his tail blade ripping huge wounds in Schorch's body. Schorch jumped back and began using his element to burn Sulfer who responded with his own element of darkness. Schorch was left there to burn...

really good! and it made me think of the pat benatar song, which also has the same name. keep these up!

-luna

Okay This was one Heckuva story and the end was HILARIOUS!(The part where Cynder found out Spyro knew the whole time)

Keep up the good writing :)

God bless,

Crocluva95

If I was there scorch would be toast! Or Ice, more like it.

nice story... i hate scorch dont you? i think everyone does... except scorch... lol

I love it and love is a battlefeild

you are always a good writer...no matter what

the dragon of the Hill

hey hey hey, i'm back again! well since this is going to be a long night for me, i decided to see what you had, and came across this in my research...not exactly what i was looking for, but still effective. well done and keep it up!

That's all i got, Laters! -Ryft

Awesome!

Truely amazing! Your writing is great, some of the best I've seen on this site. Keep it up!

Yes that would be me slitting the throat of the bitch stupid enough to touch my Spyro. :)

This is a funny yet serious story. Well done pal. Keep the work going.