OMG that was a great first chapter! Please write again soon. You would be an idiot not to I can always tell when a story it going to be good and trust me this one is. I will even beg!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I will say it a hundred more times if thats what it takes just PLEASE dont put this story on hold! I like it and can tell it has great potential. It could be a wonderful story if you continued to write it. PLEASE!!

Ha ha! Im kinda scared of how Rose is gonna be when she gets mad. *shudder* (in case ya didnt know, that implies that you had better write more, for your sake)

LMAO! i know you wont be updating but i still wanted to say what a great job you did on this chapter! good luck with writing all your stories! :D
~Topaz~

gr! i need u to update ! please~]

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU!
you can't just stop there!
please updata soon!

stick in there!

wait so how old is Alice? I like this story a lot! :-D awesome job! :-D

cool story

lyk it! plz update soon!

how old is bella? plz update soon!

thats really good! please update soon! i really like it!

-UPDRAFT

good job i really like it!

love it!

GREAT STORY love the setting, please update soon!

ok so I really liked that and think you should continue and update soon.