 AngelBabe64 2009-05-28 . chapter 2OMG that was a great first chapter! Please write again soon. You would be an idiot not to I can always tell when a story it going to be good and trust me this one is. I will even beg!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I will say it a hundred more times if thats what it takes just PLEASE dont put this story on hold! I like it and can tell it has great potential. It could be a wonderful story if you continued to write it. PLEASE!! |
 CierraIsACullen 2008-09-01 . chapter 1Ha ha! Im kinda scared of how Rose is gonna be when she gets mad. *shudder* (in case ya didnt know, that implies that you had better write more, for your sake) |
 Hateful Loving 2008-07-24 . chapter 1LMAO! i know you wont be updating but i still wanted to say what a great job you did on this chapter! good luck with writing all your stories! :D
~Topaz~ |
 lovesedward 2008-06-23 . chapter 2 gr! i need u to update ! please~] |
 Just-Peechy 2008-05-24 . chapter 2I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU!
you can't just stop there!
please updata soon! |
 MaddsLovesTwilight 2008-05-14 . chapter 2stick in there! |
 RockstarLife 2008-05-12 . chapter 1wait so how old is Alice? I like this story a lot! :-D awesome job! :-D |
 harley944 2008-05-12 . chapter 2cool story |
 dontxbexstupid1995 2008-05-05 . chapter 1lyk it! plz update soon! |
 edwardlvrtot 2008-05-03 . chapter 1how old is bella? plz update soon! |
 UPDRAFTGIRL37 2008-04-27 . chapter 1thats really good! please update soon! i really like it!
-UPDRAFT |
 forever-is-all-i'm-asking-for 2008-03-22 . chapter 1good job i really like it! |
 inluvwitacullen 2008-03-16 . chapter 1love it! |
 covenantqueen 2008-03-02 . chapter 1GREAT STORY love the setting, please update soon! |
 twilightlover 2008-02-29 . chapter 1 ok so I really liked that and think you should continue and update soon. |