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Reviews for: The Mess That Athrun Had Made
Emerald Leviney
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
this was one of the cutesy athcags fics ive ever read!! Amazing job
Mikachuu
2008-03-30 . chapter 1
That was adorable! Poor Athrun, he always thinks things through in great detail; but it just didn't work for him. I couldn't help but squee, though. I love it when he loses his composure!! You write very well, too :)
Infinite sky
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
aw...Athrun is so cute! ( I tried not to see the whole AsuCaga in this one :D)

As you know, I saw the pic! and it was ADORABLE! I just heart Athrun and this fic made me love him more!
I could practically imagine his embaressed face and the blush covering his cheeks! ;)
Melicress
2008-02-21 . chapter 1
*giggles*
Aw, so cute! :D I loved ur picy that went with this one. Athrun covered in sparkles and glue... fwwe! :)

I didn't know they did that with the power n' stuff in some places o.o if they did that where i live we'd all freeze to death XD
reckless-rage
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
Aw. It is kinda true, isn't it, that handmade stuff is better than store bought ones. I gave one to my friend on her birthday and she squealed like mad (although it might just be because of the Inuyasha stickers I placed inside) but anyway. I like this story. It's nice, and has potential to develop into something a little more...(maybe Athrun reorders the parts and does the crab for next Valentine?)
cagalliyulathha
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
I don't live in Africa and am dense concerning news and such so please explain me via pm if you don't mind ^^
excelentofe
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
sweet =)
Milisante
2008-02-16 . chapter 1
haha It was really cute^^
Nice story=)
cagallirockz
2008-02-16 . chapter 1
this was cute:)is it over?
VampyMeth
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
at least Athrun made the present eventhough it was a card it was the thought it counts.
pinkberry
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Oh that was a cute, light and sweet valentine fic. I enjoyed reading it. This story just made me love AC even more. ‘I love you’ may have been sounded clichéd nowadays but hearing those 3 simple words coming from the person you love just makes its meaning grow deeper. Another wonderful story indeed :)

pinkberry ü
An Instant King
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
Ah damn! I have a story in the works right now where Athrun gives Cagalli little mechanical crabs. So when you see it, I didn't steal your idea, ok? Now, to the review. I really wonder what Kira gave Lacus, but in the end, it doesn't matter, cause it's an asucaga story, and a very sweet one at that. The part where Cagalli's stealing Athrun's mail is a bit odd, but it's necessary for the story. I don't see Cagalli as one to anything covertly. A very lovely description of the card and the wrapping paper, and i like the image of Athrun with his hair sticking out with the glue.

No spelling or grammar mistakes that I noticed, and I'm pretty obsessive compulsive when it comes to finding typos, so good job! I think they have something similar to load shedding here, but i think they refer to it as rolling blackouts. They mainly occur in the state of California, which is not where I live. Thank you for a wonderful story.
~An Instant King
Hades.Throne.Heiress
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
You guys get power failures often? Or is it like you said in the story, it's for power saving reasons?

The ending was lightly humored and sweet, happy (belated) Valentines day to you =)
i love hershey
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
cute story. i liked it (:
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