I loved it, thanks for writing it.

it was cool keep it up

You're determined to make me cry, aren't you... *sniff* gosh that was good.

that was so sweet

It is very beautiful, very sweet indeed! But there's one thing I don't understand, did Chi-Chi die when Goku took her with him?

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! SO KAWAII AND CUTE!!!!! I think I'm gonna start bawling again *sniff sniff*
Paraffmon: That's Halo's way of saying 'WELL DONE! KEEP IT UP!' ^_^

Nani? Does this mean that Goku and ChiChi are dead? Oh well, never mind. It was a great story and I loved it. That was so sweet of Goku to come back on his anniversary and I'm happy that he kept his promise to ChiChi. Keep up the good work. Bai Bai.

smooth

That was beautiful. I'm on the verge of tears.

That is so sweet! ::tears::

Ohhh! That was a very sweet story. Please continue the good work.

How kawii! I feel so bad for ChiChi. She's lost her love so many times. That poor woman, and yet she's strong through it all. This was great!

wow!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!

BEAUTIFUL!^.^