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Star Jinin
2008-08-10
ch 1,
abuseAww!! So cute! I can SO see this happening...although in my mind, I don't think L would actually take it THAT personally that he was killed...but he IS human. And he can just be really childish like that.
Great fic!
Oximore
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseGREAT!

I can see something like that happening (or Light becoming the new shinigami god :D)
Amorpheous
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuse*falls to ground* Beautifully written. I really liked your idea of what happens to people after their death.

Great job! Your fics are always so original!

~ Oni
LadySorrow1121
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseDefinately a new favorite.

-LadySorrow
Leki
2008-03-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was incredibly good, and incredibly cute. :3 Made me go 'Aw...'.
Anna Tramell
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuseHang on? Your anniversary is Valentine's Day?! That's
mine too... sorta... I think it's officially two days
before... but anyways! How adorable! I was thinking
"Aw it's a depressing valentine's thing?" but then
he goes all smiles and the other he does and then I do
and YAY YAOI!!... Thankies for your stories...

CHU
Moro-moro
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseAhh... I'm a sucker for sweetness. While this story did have it's bitter overtures, it was sweet. :smiles: I absolutely love your take on Heaven and "Nothingness". I'm actually rather jealous; we're of the same age, and I don't think I could write something with the same intensity on the subject matter. It moved me.

I liked this story a lot!
LetThereBeRaito
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseyou know, i'm so impressed you're only fifteen and have already developed such a mature writing style!! i'm slowly reading through your back catalogue and this one just really touched me, you've injected so much emotion and detailed it evenly (not too overdone like some writers) and came out with a realistic and believable result.
well done, keep up the good work!
xx
Zedin
2008-02-21
ch 1,
abuseWonderful story, and it's very well writen as always... I'm always little jealous, when I see, that you are so young and still so talented...^^ Your T rating stories are always welcome by me...^^ (Your M rating stories are very good too, but I have uke-Raito phobia, and I can't really enjoy LxLight stories...)
een nihc
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautifully done. The concept of Heaven and Mu in the story are rather unique. L's answer in the end was genius. Haha.
PenArtist10000
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseLove it!
phoenix of hell
2008-02-17
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. Truly! They got their happiness, eventually.
Roz-chan
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written, and such a lovely idea. Can't wait to read more from you!
Eadha Ohn
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseAs always, you're one of best Death Note fanfiction writers.

Well do you think you should works on Spira Mirabilis before any more one-shots??
samiseriouslyam
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseAww...in which there is no teaching of lessons to Light...But tis fine. It was adorable.

I really liked your description of Mu, and the transfer to Heaven. Nicely done, that. :D
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