The Time Traveler applauds you for your excellent portrayal of the asshat that is Naru. You wrote him very well.

I love Naru's pov~ This is really great!

Can I just say I love you? (Okay.. not like THAT!!)

I've always wondered how Naru might have been feeling and what his thoughts were in that episode. Now, I can really imagine it :).

I love storys from Naru point of view.Great.I was always wonder what Naru thinking on this moment.

Great one shot!

AW Naru is in love XP took that idiot scientist long enough

This was amazing.
I was always thinking what was going on through his head at this moment and all of it. It solved all of my questions for episode 16. Thank you. ^.^

great one-shot!
it's nice reading the story from Naru's point of view (:

i liked it, surprisingly it really sounded like Nar.. in my opinion..

Haha, great ending! I like how you went into greater detail with the scene. Now we know just why the heck Naru was being nice!

all was good

good work

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i loved it, its very well written! i have two GH fics, but one is in continuation and the other isnt published yet... could you take a look at the one i have please?

really cute, I like your ghost hunt fics, their much better now that i get them :D

that was absolutely adorable! I love that ep! I love how she wakes up and sees him above her and even though they're in a life-or-death situation, she still blushes!

And we all know Naru loves her. At least...i like to think that.