oh. my god... that was horrible! i mean great lemon and all but that was so wrong! lol in so many ways! like damn!!

aw man! thats SUPER depressing! its bull! wow... who knew.. i think the only way to have child.. is to make love not just fu** somebody.. although when u get raped in real life.. damn that sucks when u find out ur preggo... wow it sucks.. beucase all it was, was neji type sex.. *sigh*

Neji is a jerk!


cant wait for the sequel

i feel bad for hanabi...i think you should like make her fall in love with gara

IT's sad, written well but sad... sometimes life is that way. Thanks for the hope, I'm waiting on the sequel.

I really, really like ur stories A LOT! But, I just feel that Neji should have a happy ending because he's never had any happiness since the moment he recieved the cursed seal everything's been taken away from him tat he holds dear to him. I think through all that despair, hopelessness, and watever it's about time he recieves his little piece of heaven on earth.

Well I still kinda feel bad for Neji, more for Hanabi though now, though TenTen has most of my pity. I wonder, oh authoress, if she ever got hooked up with Kiba

aww i almost feel sorry for hanabi ... almost ... oh well ... in the series does she actually hate hinata? itz been so long since i watched naruto ... HEY there's something i should do ... i will now spend my easter break reading the naruto manga =] ahh ty for that inspiration ... it'll give me a good break from my assignments as well!! ... niwaiiz Author Alert for sequel notice =D toOdlez i will probably read the other story of yourz .. umm forgot what it was called but the kakahina one ... just don't have the time right now ... niwaiiz cya

does hanabi not being able to give birth have anything to do with the sequel to Beautiful Lie being a nejihina??

don't remember if i reviewed for this yet...but who cares!
I liked it, it seemed fitting to have both of them miserible, though i feel a little towards them (Despite the fact they both kinda deserve it, especially Neji).
still great writting! can't wait to read more of your fics!

On second thought I did like how you did his pov and how it contrasted with hers. Looks like both of them are miserable. I am really looking forward to the continuation. I have a feeling Hanabi is going to be ten times worse in that one!

this fic is quite dark but was so interestin to read
u r truly a great writer :D
i love your fics :D
i love how u describe their emotions and the situations, it really pulls u in :D

They deserve each other they really deserve each other. Anyways I like this look into the twisted obsessed mind of Neji. Although there were times I thought you should have use different words. Great job!

So Hanabi is 16 here. I hope the sequel she in her early 20's.

You right very well.