This was most excellently written. I liked the flitting between days, the repetition - which felt far from repetitive when reading - was brilliant.

Very good work, I raise my glass to you.

~Ark

'did you get laid?'

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hurr hurr.

Oh my gosh... This easily the best FE8 (SethxEirika too) fanfic I've ever read. While the idea of time repeating itself isn't new,everything else was! This is defeintly one of my favorite stories ever. Great job!

Ahh! THis is the second time I've read this story (I've been re-reading my favorites, by the way, haha) and just now I noticed how great Forde is to write about. :D "Did you get laid?"

Wouldn't it be lovely if he figured out Eirika and Seth were in love, and then figured out what Seth did? XD

I love this story. From beginning to end and everything in between. It was such a wonderful, refreshing read. It actually seemed like something that would be in the game, and characters are delightfully in character, not some shadow of who they are supposed to represent. It's lovely to also find a story from Seth's POV since most of the Seth/Eirika fics are from her POV. Ever since I started FE:SS I've hungered for something more for this pairing and couldn't find anything to really whet my appetite. There was so few fan art, so little discussion, and most of the fics I read are OOC or exaggerated. This story has given me a good, fulfilling, fix and I thank you.

w00t w00t! Yay! a fitting ending for this story!

haha! w00t w00t! the time staff is broken!

huh. a new twist.

huh. another interesting chapter. So Knoll has the time staff?

hm... interesting.

great first chap!! I can't wait to read more.

I love this! You are so creative. Though I wish there Riev had offered an explanation as to why Seth was a surprise - I would assume about him reliving the same situation over and over, or pertaining to Seth's course of action - but then, us readers can muddle that over ourselves. Thank you very much this!

for some reason the music "Confront the Past" from the Tower of Valni map is in my head...as I'm reading this.

How grim...

Eirika! how could you? trollop!...I knew it! I knew Forde would notice something! wonder if Seth is actually unconscious in the healer's tent talking his sleep with Eirika there.