I've said it before, but this is a fascinating story. Everything's handled very realistically and well. I was wondering when the issue of abortion would come up. Even if this isn't really "about" that, it seemed inevitable that someone would bring it up at some point, and the fact that the sand stops them seems like a good explanation for why they can't do it. I was a bit worried that Gaara was going to get all OOC and motherly all of a sudden, but you're keeping them all in character.

But dammit, I'm even more ** at Naruto now. Even after learning that Gaara didn't betray him after all, he hasn't even checked on him to make sure he's okay after he took his virginity. I can see why he'd be distracted what with Sasuke coming home, but still...argh. That's no way to treat someone who's supposed to be your friend.

I don't know if you're ever planning on updating this--looks like it hasn't been touched in over a year--but still, I'd like to find out what happens next.

I'm liking this story so far. This chapter didn't move quite as fast as the previous one--too much exposition/description for my tastes--but still, a fascinating story. I find girl-Gaara strangely attractive (but then, it IS Gaara.) I'm ** off at Naruto for being such an insensitive clod to him/her. Hopefully he'll shape up in the next chapter.

This is an interesting start. I normally don't like gender-switch fics because people have a tendency to change the character's entire personality, but you've actually made it realistic and kept Gaara in character.

**, yes! This is so deliciously screwy and twisted and awesome... So much yes for the Naruto-isn't-a-God-in-bed-sex, and for the awesome moring after. ANd Gaara informing the council.. just so good.

heya, I just thought I'd say I really enjoyed this fic, and found it really interesting - since it hasn't been updated in like a year I won't be holding my breath, but if you ever do feel like continuing it I'd love to see how it goes, because I've never read anything like it before. And I would be fascinated to see how a Gaara/Naruto/Sakura/Sasuke foursome worked - I mean, I can sort of see how it might fit together, but I have trouble seeing how they'd get there from here!

So seriously, even if you never continue this fic I am still entirely delighted by it - I'll probably be trying to play all the ideas out in my head for days :)

-s.

I hope this story isn't dead! You've got a lot of intriguing ideas going on, and I want to see Naruto when he realizes he got Gaara pregnant.

Livi

I really wish I could leave a better review, but would telling you that I am only going to get 3 hours of sleep tonight before getting up for work because I stayed up reading this fic suffice? It's so heart-breaking and argh! When is Naruto going to realize he has a kid on the way! He's off thinking life is great, dreaming of a three-way with his sexy teammates, while Gaara and his family are about to go over the edge here!

Yeah, I can't look away. I'm hooked. Ya got me XD I can't get enough and I look forward to an update.

Much Love,
M

how interesting.
you've pulled this off so well, that i can't bring myself to be too mad about gaara being stuck as a pregnant female... kudos to you creating such an interesting plot twist! mpregs are annoying and... creepy, haha. so i like this.

can't wait to see where you take this.

Wow, you are such a wonderful writer. I'm entranced with this story. i took your warnings at the beginning of the first chapter as a challenge like "what, you can't scare me off." I expected I'd stop reading once I noticed how badly written it would be. But then "surprise!" because it wasn't. After the warnings I thought this was going to some weird "i don't like gay pairings, so I'm going to make gaara a girl" fics. But it isn't. I've always been a fan of threesome pairings (not just smut) so adding on another person just makes it more interesting. Polygamous (is that the right word?) relationships are just much more complicated and interesting to me.

Gaara as a girl? Wow. I never thought I'd be into a story like this. The first chapter actually made me depressed, Naruto's rejection of Gaara was just said (not to mention Gaara is my favorite character.) I'm assuming from the pairing in the summary the Naruto comes around. But Sasuke and Sakura? I can't imagine. I hope that the first chapter wasn't to be considered the "GaaraNaru" part of the story.

Sasuke's return was a little downplayed but I understand your reasons for doing so. I'm getting a little sick of NaruSasu stories so I'm hoping Gaara becomes more of a focus. I really love your writing style and I love the way you dealt with the pronoun issue. I'm hoping that Gaara does revert back to himself during the story though. I'm afraid that first chapter is all the Naruto/Gaara that's going to be here. And while I do like the Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura pairing, I really do love Gaara alot. Well I'll see what's in store soon. Can't wait till you update.

--elysia

p.s. sorry for the obnoxiously long review. ;)

I like this story so far, but... Naruto is coming off as a real bastard in it...

Yes, you updated! I so, so like this story, it's so unusual!

God I love the Sand sibs to pieces, and you threw them in a angst pitfall! *sniffles* It was so, so heartwrenching... I hope they'll come round!

And Gaara kept the foetus because she doesn't have a choice... makes a lot of sense, here.

I loved Kankuro's POV here, you did him well, even if it's was uneasy for you.

I didn't felt that sasuke's return was rushed, but to be honest I was not reading the story for him. ^^

Keep the good work!

you know i find garra/naruto a naughty little treat that i hide from others as a matter of course. I am not sure how the others are going to blend in. I really enjoy that this is written from sands end most. As most stories focus in on the leaf nins and leave us guessing at how the sand sibs deal.

i hope its not another long dry spell for you as far as writing goes. I will be looking forward to see where this goes.

A chapter at long last! Great! Wonderful! Bravo! For once, i kind of dislike Naruto and his selfishness at the moment. Nothing's that great about Sasuke! he deserves to sleep with roaches! XP

anyway, excellent job! Poor Gaara-chan!

yay u updated! :D love the chap, poor gaara :( ...i love gaara and all but he sounds so depressed that it gets me a bit depressed for him! (like wanting to kill ur own kid...but then again he isn't REALLY a girl...and he didn't want it lol) i'm kinda mad at naruto at the momment...now he knows gaara didn't keep info from him and yet he's lie "i'll fix it later" (*tisk* boys ) well great fanfic and hope u update soon! (urs is my fav at the momment! xD )

man...poor gaara xD heh...damn i wonder when it hits gaara that he's gonna have a kid!! O_o lol man i wish i could see a pic of him in girl form :D well great fanfic and hope you update soon!! ^-^