 kittycats_legacy 2008-04-25 . chapter 1 Really great stoty! I liked how you potray Batou. |
 Craig 2008-04-14 . chapter 1 Very well written scene. Plausible, some foreshadowing, some hints of what went on (though I do submit that an armored suit is not something Section 9 deals with commonly) and you can just see how the thing would have played out.
Might I request a second offering, perhaps from the point-of-view of the Uchikomas? They ought to be disecting the event to pieces, trying to figure out why their humans aren't satisfied with the outcome. After all, they did everything right... didn't they? |
 Elarus 2008-04-14 . chapter 1I read this after Only Natural, and they fit together in a lovely way ^^
All I can say for improvement would just be typos and such, but as you said, your computer isn't working properly, so it doesn't matter :3
I feel your sentiments about Computers - Windows reminds me greatly on an Uchikoma with a hangover >0<
I love your stuff, I hope any stuff I post'll be even half this good to read!
Elarus |
 lightningmouse 2008-04-10 . chapter 1Augh! Now _I_ miss them all over again!
T_T |
 brightbear 2008-03-08 . chapter 1 Poor Batou. A sobering look at what Section 9 really lost when they lost the Tachikomas...
Good characterisation all round. |
 ld80061 2008-02-27 . chapter 1Another excellent story, with good use of implied and unstated truths. More, please! |
 The Light of the Shadows 2008-02-22 . chapter 1T.T Wah! Poor Togusa! That was so sweet about the Tachikoma... |
 wlk68 2008-02-16 . chapter 1I enjoyed this. Very nicely done. |
 RainyDayz 2008-02-16 . chapter 1 Wow. Just wow. You did an amazing job. It was short, but packed with descriptive imagery and emotion. You're very talented. I loved it. Poor Togusa. Always getting hurt, but who would have it any other way? I sincerely hope to see more Ghost in the Shell fics from you. This fandom is growing stale and it was a real treat to see this story, so thank you.
God bless!
~RainyDayz |
 Riana1 2008-02-16 . chapter 1I can taste the bitterness in these words. This was brilliant and perfect. How could anyone replace the Tachikoma? |
 Jason M. Lee 2008-02-16 . chapter 1Aww... The Tachikomas were like children. Military-esque power, but still children. |