Sigh. It doesn't carry the label "complete," but this tender little story has not been updated in more than two years. Oh well. It stands beautifully on its own.

Really great stoty! I liked how you potray Batou.

Very well written scene. Plausible, some foreshadowing, some hints of what went on (though I do submit that an armored suit is not something Section 9 deals with commonly) and you can just see how the thing would have played out.

Might I request a second offering, perhaps from the point-of-view of the Uchikomas? They ought to be disecting the event to pieces, trying to figure out why their humans aren't satisfied with the outcome. After all, they did everything right... didn't they?

I read this after Only Natural, and they fit together in a lovely way

All I can say for improvement would just be typos and such, but as you said, your computer isn't working properly, so it doesn't matter :3

I feel your sentiments about Computers - Windows reminds me greatly on an Uchikoma with a hangover 0

I love your stuff, I hope any stuff I post'll be even half this good to read!

Elarus

Augh! Now _I_ miss them all over again!

T_T

Poor Batou. A sobering look at what Section 9 really lost when they lost the Tachikomas...

Good characterisation all round.

Another excellent story, with good use of implied and unstated truths. More, please!

T.T Wah! Poor Togusa! That was so sweet about the Tachikoma...

I enjoyed this. Very nicely done.

Wow. Just wow. You did an amazing job. It was short, but packed with descriptive imagery and emotion. You're very talented. I loved it. Poor Togusa. Always getting hurt, but who would have it any other way? I sincerely hope to see more Ghost in the Shell fics from you. This fandom is growing stale and it was a real treat to see this story, so thank you.

God bless!

RainyDayz

I can taste the bitterness in these words. This was brilliant and perfect. How could anyone replace the Tachikoma?

Aww... The Tachikomas were like children. Military-esque power, but still children.