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fictionlover94
2009-06-18 . chapter 3
i love this story you should have made wally and kuki married, too. update, soon, please?
PenName2
2009-06-10 . chapter 3
must update thins to go to be left undone.

:)
Sachiko Ogasawara
2009-04-12 . chapter 3
say when will you update the next chapter i wanna know what happens owkie hehehe:P:P
Terminator101
2009-01-14 . chapter 3
I got an idea can one of my characters protcets Nigel U. & Rachael hes a teen but he likes the knd and will help at any time also he has a license to kill
haso.namikazi soul reaper
2008-12-18 . chapter 3
I have idea for numbha 1!
Hide!1
haso.namikazi soul reaper
2008-12-18 . chapter 2
oshuwa?
good job
oshuwa?
haso.namikazi soul reaper
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
aw...
great job dude/dudette
01WolfxxMistress10
2008-12-13 . chapter 3
PLEASE hurry and update! I love this chapter! It's soo funny! LMAO! Update please!! Dont' make me go on my knees and start begging. Anyways, great story...er...chapter... =)
Doc2.0
2008-11-22 . chapter 3
i absolutly LOVE this story, i was practically giggling towards the end of it. i can just picture Nigel frozen and being dragged onto the ship lol. The updating, although slow, is well worth the wait. Heres hoping for a little bit quicker updates and completly awesome chapters.
mantinziza
2008-09-26 . chapter 3
Nice, the whole story. Great.

Hope to see more from you, soon.
LittleBlue33
2008-09-20 . chapter 3
wow likeing the sory
smaginn
2008-09-14 . chapter 3
lizzie is definitely gonna KILL them... especially, after nigel promised there wasnt anything going on between them
luv is in da air
2008-09-14 . chapter 3
O.O gotta keep readin so u betta update
plz make wally tell kuki pretty plz with a cherry on top
Nigel's Leading Woman
2008-09-13 . chapter 3
(place epic, cliff-hanger music here. :D) Holy crap! That's one heck of an exciting cliff-hanger if you ask me! I hope Nigel and Rachel will survive Lizzie... and I hope Wally will FINALLY confess to Kuki! But wait--What about Abby and Hoagie? Aww, it seems that the cool-sweetqueen is startin' a crush on everyone's favorite, chubby-goofy pilot! ;P

Great work! I can't wait until the next chapter. It was definetely worth the wait. ^^
bsc9999
2008-09-13 . chapter 3
lizzie is going to kill him. and rachel. as lee would say: Not cool.
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