Reviews for Faces in the Crowd

Lindale 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseNicee. Skim reading = not good for this type of fic! I can figure out the people straight away. (I naturally skim read, so it isn't just you) Right, minor confusion; see three ellyn at her side, all of them echoes of Elrond. Right, now, are they his sons and his father? Because Elros chose to be mortal and therefore didn't go to the halls of Mandos. Bummer, can't be his sons, they didnb't sail! NOW im confused. You wrote 'debark'. Shouldn't this be disembark? Very thought provoking. Lindale
Vanafindiel 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was a short chapter, but very good. Regards, Vanafindiel
An avid fan 2008-02-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseEpilachna- I don't seem to be as well-versed in LOTR cannon as you are. Can you explain this sentence? "I see three ellyn at her side, all of them echoes of Elrond. The two alike in face and form I dare not name, even in my inner thoughts." Who are the "three ellyn" you refer to? Another thought-provoking piece of writing; I look forward to more!