Ooh I love this so mysterious

This has got to be my favourite chapter of this whole story.

great story. thanks for this chapter, it was great. Love reading this, thanks for sharing. cant wait to read more.

Can't wait to see what this new character is going to do or how far he is willing to go!! Glad Kathryn is giving in a little anyway!

great chapter. love the power play. thats great its in the open too. thanks for sharing, please continue. i cant wait to read more.

I am tired of being in suspense, But at the same time suspense is what makes it great!!

great to see he chose B'Elanna! And I definitely agree they would've been amazing together on the show, but the stupid TPTB decided to suddenly drop it and go for PT (eww eww eww), thus ruining the show

no one cares about the secondary story...get back to the main plot- why is this child so impt? How far along is Janeway? Is the kid telepathic with her or only Tom?

Harry and B'Elanna are cute together but i need to know what's going to happen next between Tom and Kathryn!! please update soon!!

I vote Harry decides for B'Elanna

O why does she keep doing that to poor Tom?? please update soon!!

lol you drive me insane you know that. Just put them together already.

Great Chapter, if he goes to B'Elanna that will cause much drama and angst to the story great plot devices, So a lot to write, But I would rather have him with Kathryn at least eventually, but she can go with the Big Guy too!! So many possibilities ~ looking forward to seeing wheat you do with it!

great chapter, loved the last scene. i wouldnt be able to concentrate either, lol. well done thanks for sharing.

Stupid Kazon always ruin everything! I enjoy where this story is going and love the pairing (frankly, Chakotay makes me nauseous and I love Tom).

A few words of advice:

Try to get some spell-checks done. I don't mind a couple misspellings or wrong words, I'm guilty of that myself, but there are quite a few in the text and it throws off the enjoyability of the read.

Anyway- keep up the good work!