I loved it! So awesome!

I liked this a lot. Edward's laughing at the girl's thoughts was funny. I liked it too because this was one of the few fanfics that held my attention the whole way through.
Good writing!

Aww. It's so adorable. Original idea. I love it! So Edward/Bella! So sweet!

That was amazing.

Aw. This is so cute! Great job!!

That was beautiful!

Oohh! It's nice. Cutesy, fluff, but very nice. It's after she's been changed, right? Sorry if I'm stupid tonight (I think I've already told you that, huh?), I'm kinda sleep deprived. But I'm not tired... oh well. So, anywho, very good. I liked it. Which is a good thing, just incase you were wondering.

AW!
Sweet and beautiful...
That was so cute and original.
Keep it coming!

I love it. Not many people do the relationship from someone that doesn't know anything about them. I've read one, two tops. But I have to say this is nicely done. The person saw things. You even gave it a theme. Thing. It's really good.

This was good ^_^ you did a great job capturing how edward and bella look from 3rd person view.