I like the idea of a threesome, but not in the way it started. I seriously think Mary-Anne should dump Logan and forget Stacey. What kind of guy is he that he cheats with her best friend, then has the nerve to say that he is in love with both of them and that he can't choose? What an jerk! Mary-Anne deserves better than that douche bag and I really wish she would meet someone else. Even if she eventually went back to Logan and Stacey, I think it would be great for her to have someone else first. This person might be able to help her with her hang-ups. It would also show Logan exactly how she felt when she found out about Stacey.

keep up the good work!

Lot of Jacks in this world, I can tell you that. I was lucky; my family understood. Stacey, Mary Anne, and Logan were very brave to come out to Claudia, Jack, and Kaylee -- cutest name ever, that, but I may be biased as a Firefly fan. :-)

I give thanks for your gentle treatment of a difficult subject and am eager for more of this story.

I don't think I can truly agree with this arrangement. I'd be ok with the three-way relationship if it had started out more honestly or if it's a true threesome, but the fact that Logan cheated with Stacey first makes me disgusted. He's supposed to love her, but he goes and bangs her friend, then has the gall to admit that he's also in love with her to Mary-Anne. What an A-hole! Mary-Anne only agreed to this in some sort of desperate attempt to keep Logan. It's coming off as kind of demeaning and I don't think Logan is worth it. Mary-Anne deserves more than this crap and should have given him an ultimatum or should've just been strong enough to leave him.

This chapter, and the way it looks like the story might be unfolding, makes me happy in ways you can't possibly know. Just... please try to treat the subject respectfully going forward, as you have begun.

-- the Stacey to her Logan (though we got there in a far more measured, deliberate way)

Mary Anne should have dumped him. It's not like it was a one-time thing and he regretted it. He has been doing it for a while and has even developed feelings for Stacey. And even though Mary Anne outed him, he will probably still be with Stacey. It isn't fair to Mary Anne and she deserves better than a cheating piece of crap boyfriend. It doesn't matter if he loves her because he can't say he will be completely faithful to her now, only that he isn't hiding it anymore. If she isn't willing to completely share him, she should dump him and let him decide if Stacey is worth it.

I feel bad, because I've been reading this story for some time now and not reviewing. I know how important feedback is.

This story is something so different to any fanfiction I've come across, especially in the BSC category (and especially to find one so well written). It's so raw and dark, and I admit disturbing, but that's what lures me in. Teddy is so horrible, yet you manage to get inside his head. It's my favourite story out of all your other work, and to be honest when I started reading this I was expecting something different. Definitely anticipating the next chapter - I wonder how genuine Logan truly is acting.

I am so happy you updated! I didn't think Mary Anne would be the one to take her own life. I'm glad she's gonna get the help she needs and that she and Logan will make things better between them. Can't wait for the next chapter!

You're an amazing writer! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Heard of prison justice. Think it's a good idea to make possible offending criminals afraid, though it barely helps with criminals who can't help themselves anymore(ted) except for making them think twice. Thin kit's sick though. Did the prisioner know what Ted did? Ted got karma but it looks like he killed off that prisoner.

Hope that fear of going back to that & prison justice stops ted just a little though I read ahead and know so far it doesn't.

Update soon, this thriller is thrilling well as thrilling as a story about a psychopathic, disgusting predator can be...

Whoa this is turning into a thriller. THink Stacey & Logan should come clean & stop cheating their friend of course. I think they should mvoe from the house since Ted is watching them. Is the surnname Thomas a coincidence? WHy does KRisty keep the Thomas surname after hre father walked out?

I think they should have more cops paroling 24/7 & they shoul dmove where they can't be found but still have 24/7 cop parole until Ted is caught.

Also I think they should'vegone somewhere else for the parry instead of the other way around but then again Ted coud be waiting once they got home. I also think they (police) should search for Ted at still times like this so they can catch him.

Great chapter. I feel so sorry for Mary Anne. Less so for Stacey because I think she is a disgusting human being for continuing to sleep with her "best friend"'s husband. Logan went a bit crazy there at the end, huh? Guess it's getting to him just as much as it is to the girls.

Wow.

Really great writing here. You are very talented. I have read WYBB, and it's definitely one of the best stories on here. I was so excited when I found out you updated this story! It's very heavy but well-written, and I liked how Mary Anne went to go see Margo.

Oh wow. Not sure what to say about Logan/ Stacey. Can't wait to see where it's going, feel infinitely sorry for MA.

Its a good story, but I think you should stop having all the raping and have somemore romance between Stacey and Logan!