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| Kadigan 2008-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseThe looped storytelling style is most effective here. A great bit of work! |
| Pudupudu 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! That was intense and a beautiful portrayal of their friendship. Heart warming yet so sad. I love it... thing is, I want more! Brava! |
| Estriel 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseAw! This was nose-crinklingly cute! The last line was particularly nice- fab structuring! I really liked it; and I'm off to R&R some of your other work now... Es xx |
| MDHammer 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseamazing, I love this so much. It made me want to cry because it was so amazingly amazing |
| BlackWolfHowling 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI'm getting tired of simply saying 'I love it, it's perfect.' Honestly, I need to get a better vocabulary for congratulating excellent pieces of literature. Have you considered getting published? |
| Susicar 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThis time, review and terrible sorry. I suffer a misunderstanding with your fic, please don't worry. I liked, is well written, as usual in your works, I fear poor Doctor Watson ins't in your lucky year this 2008. Bloody talented authors... Thank for sharing, and i hope you are so prolific like you are lately... |
| Monty Twain 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseOoh, thank God. I thought you were going to leave me with a fairly predictable cliffhanger. |
| CB 2008-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseO, that is so scary. I can't swim either, and I would freak so bad if that happened to me! This was a great idea...and you did an awesome job! |
| LA Suka 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseLife jackets?? Great little piece. ;) |
| VHunter07 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! That was great! I completely missed this little oneshot! And I'm in total agreement with KCS, it's entirely Canonical and VERY well written! I think what made it so believeable for me, is that I knew EXACTLY how poor Watson felt as the precise thing has happened to me before. It's a scary thing to be so out of control. Anyway, superb job & thanks so much for sharing it with us! |
| Lynn 2008-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseO, my - that was intense! I think I freaked out more than Holmes or Watson did when tehy went in the water! I can't swim either, so I can completely sympathize! (shivers) |
| Runa93 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! i always loved Holmes and Watson's friendship and this is a classic example! Thanks for the great story! |
| Protector of the Gray Fortr... 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was fantastic. What a terrifying idea, I had a friend whose father tried to teach them to swim in this exact manner and even now she is frightened. It was a very touching take on Holmes and Watson's relationship...and perfectly in character! Thanks for writing that...it made my day. And keep writing you have a definite talent. -PGF |
| KaizokuShojo 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseVery good! Quite nicely done. ^^ I know how Watson feels--I've been in a similar situation. XD |
| MoonlitPuddle 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseSvet... Typo - "He screamed as his words were interrupted with *chocking* as his head kept disappearing beneath the surface and bobbing up again." But nice! ^.^ |