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muishiki
2009-11-17 . chapter 7
I remember reading this story back in the late 90's early 20's. It was an awesome story then, and remains so. Hope the author (who probably has a million other pressing things to do) will eventually finish it or release the plot notes for others to continue where he/she left off.


Great read.
Hisshou
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
Read this fic back in 2002. Loved it then. Still love it now :) Hope more people read and review, even if it is incomplete and probably will never be finished, it's still a darned good fic.
Nosferatum
2009-10-21 . chapter 7
Pity you've just got and disappeared on us. I guess there's no point to write a review on this nowadays, after 8 years, but well...
Good fic and all that...
flood125
2009-09-18 . chapter 7
theres a conversation to look foward to
DCWestby
2009-09-17 . chapter 7
Bahaha... I knew it happen eventually.. hehe... Hilarious!
dongaro
2009-06-08 . chapter 7
I must admit that that this story was extremely well done. I normally find flaws in the way authors portray Rei and Ranma. Either by making Ranma too smart too fast (he might be strong but smart he isn't the brightest bulb with things outside martial arts), or by making Rei learn about emotions within days rather than months (she's been an emotionless doll for years it takes time to change). The way that this fic is written keeps these characters true to their nature while slowly changing them as events shape them in new and different ways.

I particularly enjoyed the way Rei handled learning about Ranma being in her body. Just calm acceptance and moving on with the mission. I would be curious to see what might happen if the neko ken got involved. However as it has been 7 years I don't see that happening.

The main reason that I'm writing this review is to say that this was an amazing story, and that i hope at some point you continue writing maybe not fanfics (although I would be happy to read a new chapter of this), but maybe original stories. Your writing style is amazing and flows smoothly and without awkward jumps. I also enjoyed the introspective nature of the story and the way you identified who was in charge of the body by the ' ' and * * for when they were thinking. Again thank you for writing such an interesting story. And even if this story is not continued I hope you continue writing.
anonim1979
2009-04-04 . chapter 1
Some day some day You will update. Some day.

Even if you don't believe in yourself, believe in me who believes in you! ;)
I read your stories years ago and even rereading them more than one time doesn't make them any less great and fabulous they were first time.
With that thought I put you on alert list and hope that You will update someday...
Violet Shadows
2008-12-23 . chapter 7
;_; worst ending point ever, especially since this will probably never be updated. Oh well, maybe we'll learn someday.
James Birdsong
2008-04-16 . chapter 7
Hehehe couldn't keep secret forever. Sheesh no one at all at NERV can add 3 + 2 to get 5. Ranma told that he becomes a her with cold water. Ranma told his name and birthday. If they had investigated his story they would have found out here was correct. He probably would have told about Antartica if anyone would listen. Rei and Ranma not seen in same place at same time. Geez security and informartion so coocoo. It's no suprise that Rei and Ranma(II) share same body.
James Birdsong
2008-04-16 . chapter 6
Excellent
James Birdsong
2008-04-16 . chapter 5
Yes quite good
James Birdsong
2008-04-16 . chapter 4
Woohoo
James Birdsong
2008-04-16 . chapter 3
*laughs* Great. Yep good hehehe.
James Birdsong
2008-04-16 . chapter 2
Great
James Birdsong
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
Quite good. I do believe this is good. How interesting.
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