Well, spelling and grammar and all that good stuff is... well, good. Only a handful of errors in a relatively long body of work (the most amusing was "violation" in place of "volition," especially given the context.) As to the content... wow. It's interesting and seems to be well-thought-out. The beginning was a bit too dark and nasty for my tastes, but at least you didn't make it more viscereal. At any rate, I'm hooked, if only to see how this plays out. Good job.

Wow, I'm the first to reply! Anyway, I would like to say that this is one of the best Evangelion Continuing Series/Crossovers I've ever read. It's also one of the fanfictions where I'm constantly checking the site to see if the next part has come out yet. I was hoping that part 8 would be out by now, but I'm just that lucky.

The author really has a knack for words. I like that way that he can change the mood of the reader as the point of view switches between characters. A definite excellent read for Ranma and Eva lovers.

ooh..i just can't wait for the next chapter(s)!

Whee. This fic isn't quite as weird as NGE itself is the first time you're seeing it, but it certainly keeps up with that cryptic weirdness precedent. Since it's not over yet I'm not going to leave a huge review like I usually do, but I'll say that I'm looking forward to seeing more chapters. :D Keep up the good work! Moogle