This story is beautiful and overpowering. And it reads just like a song.

As someone who has been close to that brink myself and spent the last week trying to pull someone from it, I ask, how do you justify?

And why is the goodness of life stolen from people so young? And why are we dead inside before we're 20? And why do we have to force ourselves to heal?

I'm sorry. I am crying.

~RG~

I LOVE IT!
Just soo brill.

Just like you orange Smoothie story, this had me in tears. Contradictory, this one's sad. If I don't stop switching I'm going to explode!
I think I may be getting high of your stories here.

I thought I reviewed this already... Oh well! :D

You're a cynic, ya know that? A cruel, twisted, cynic. I LOVE THAT IN AUTHORS! Makes the stories more believable. And funny. Cynicism is hilarious, in my my opinion. :D

-Bows down to the almighty God that you so obviously are- I love you.

The story was really good. Kinda dark, and depressing, but it really worked well with the times of society or late. No criticism for you! :)

That was really good, depressing, and really brilliant. So emotional.

I really loved this one. So much that I don't even know what should I write in response to you. Sorry.

Maybe just... nice idea.

I found your fanfic thanks to BurnAwayy's pic ( http://burnawayy./art/bath-towels-116374664 ) justa btw if you didn't know about it.

I'm really happy I read this recommended one-shot.

wow! seriously, I loved how you described the action there, the ride i mean. really impressive I myself felt like my blood is pumped with adrenaline.

My own vision grew hazy with tears, while reading the last few paragraphs TAT

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Wow. This is just... beautiful. And it is so well writing, how come there are so few comments? The writing is great and it's so, so sad and perfectly balanced emotional. Well done.

This is one of very few fanfics that has stood the test of time for me – I read this almost a year ago and it was just as vivid and powerful during my rereading today as it was that very first time. There’s something about the way that you balance metaphorical writing with blunt statements and dark reality that gives me goosebumps reading this – it’s descriptive enough and abstract enough to be beautiful and larger-than-life, but you don’t overdo it and you don’t go out of your way to show off your vocabulary, so the fic seems grounded in reality rather than escapism, which makes it much easier to empathise with the characters. And then there’s the beauty of your individual sentences – that last line is one of the most powerful things I’ve ever read, and I actually remembered it word-for-word from last time I read this. Not to mention the first sentence, and that phrase about Kenny fighting with his dad in a “strange, shuffling two-step that’s only tragic because it’s practiced”...that’s amazing writing right there.

Anyway, I’m not going to go on because this is pretty much as perfect as a fic gets so I don’t have anything remotely constructive to say, but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. Kudos!

The last couple of paragrapsh were extremely powerful. Please forgive my short review - I can't summon the words to express the emotions this made me feel.

God, I must have read this five times now and I still haven't left a comment. I'm so awful.

Your writing is so continuously amazing, and you make it seem one-hundred percent effortless. I really don't know how you do that.
I like these dark, angsty fics the best! And thank God, you write them so well. Good ones are so hard to come by. I especially like Cartman in this story, for some reason. Maybe it's the way you made him more human than he's usually made out to be. He's still an asshole, but you touched on the fact that he does care a little bit.
Everyone was written beautifully, actually. Not that I expected any less from you.

I could keep rambling, but I feel like I'm not doing this fic any justice in doing so.
Keep writing, girly~!

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I can't believe I've never come across this before. Or the fact that only five other people reviewed. >:c!!

Your description is fascinating, and it all seems very realistic in contrast to many other "angsty" fics which have mostly come off as overdone and cliche. No, it's not too wangsty, in my opinion.

"Otherside" is my favorite RHCP song, by the way... and I did cry a little when I turned my iTunes on and listened while I read this. It takes a. freaking. lot. for fanfic writers to make me cry to their story. (Read as: I'm glad you made me cry, it means you're a great author! XD.)

Kudos for doing an amazing job :)

~Fushigi

I had to wait a few days before reviewing this. The imagery that stayed with me, though, was the blood: It is everywhere. It's most effective streaming across Kyle's helmet, and an especially poetic reminder of what exactly is at sake here -- young lives, obviously, but vitality as well.

Being tragically goth (or maybe not) I love the opening sentence. You read and see images of wrist-cutting and it's generally depicted with some kind of melodramatic or whimsical dark flair, but you establish a kind of gusto that a person not truly serious about killing himself would display. I think. My guess is that the fact that Stan would choose wrist-cutting indicates that he is looking for attention, or perhaps for an outlet, but not really looking to die.

Weirdly enough, I don't get "Otherside" at all when I read this. Something off of "Judas O," maybe?

Oh, also: It's a truly twisted world when Cartman is the voice of reason. Anyway, I like this a lot, because I am a sucker for blood in any context.

You know, I haven't been able to cry from mere sadness and angst in the longest time. Last year was angst dripping from the ears, and now it feels as if I'm not even capable of tears anymore- but your stuff, your stuff makes me tear up. I'm amazed that this was original, because it seems so in character, but it would have been amazing original anyways- You're fucking awesome. Thanks for writing, and keep it up.
By the way, I was searching through my favorite stories today and realized I had like, three by you in there, so I'm finally adding you as a favorite author.

Wow. That was really, really great! It made me cry (and get pissed off with Kenny for doing that...)
You're such a fantastic writer!