It's very cute and touching! Your tone is gentle, which is perfect for the dreamy setting. However, I found the birds and animals to be a bit distracting, since the main focus seems to be on the light, trees, and feelings evoked. I think the great thing about a dream sequence is that you can safely omit/include whichever things you want without having to worry too much about being realistic.

Oddly enough, I was actually intending to do a fic for this song too! I have not finished writing it yet, but when I post it, I'd appreciate your opinion if you get the chance to see it!

It's so short! But so sweet! I love it! I don't see KaneXSalima ones that often, but most of the ones that I do read are so sweet like this one!