|Reviews for Citizen Erased|
| sonia 1/18/09 . chapter 1
Interesting story... I think a sequel will be nice... I like Sasuke in the story, more open and emotional (don't know thats the right word to describe him).
| crimsonstripe 1/4/09 . chapter 1
That's a really cool idea. I like this one-shot very much. Can't wait to read the sequals if there is one.
| The Disappeared 12/20/08 . chapter 1
Great fic! Man, I like this whole cyber punk thing...interesting take. I like how you transformed the Naruto world into AU but kept a lot of it the same - the massacre, ANBU, Team 7 - they were all nice touches!
| Magicians of the Yami 10/6/08 . chapter 1
OMG. this was just. GREAT. i love the plot! O_O
| Scandinavian-Lime-Tree 9/28/08 . chapter 1
AH, satisfying :). I keep reading it over and over and over... haha. I love your cyberverse stories, please write more (I've read them all now... eh heh :D)
| ct 8/15/08 . chapter 1
| madelhc 8/10/08 . chapter 1
| AGENT Kuma-chan 7/11/08 . chapter 1
I like how you wrote this story. So much description and you allowed the setting to fully bloom so that the reader can imagine it.
As well, I like the idea of the anomalies and how you still managed to let them have their 'skills' without keeping them in a Naruto world...Good work.
One question, if Sakura is supposed to be 13 when she finds out about the choice, wouldn't that mean she's 13 at the end, not 12? and therefore Sasuke is 15 and Naruto 14, instead of them being 14 and 13 respectively?
| Twinnet 7/1/08 . chapter 1
Wow, that was awesome
I hope u write a sequeal
I'd really like to know what happens next
| city with no people 6/26/08 . chapter 1
| Reddragon13x 6/10/08 . chapter 1
. I loved it! Especially how you incorporated things from the canon but still made it unique.
| mintxrain 6/7/08 . chapter 1
| SamiNee 5/25/08 . chapter 1
this was really good! I'm going to look around for a sequel too! Can't wait for it XD
| Oinone 3/31/08 . chapter 1
So original! It's the first time I've ever read a Cyberpunk!verse of Naruto, and it's all your fault if I get addicted to it! Really, this really caught my attention. Nice job!
| Ribs On The Run 3/30/08 . chapter 1
Really good. I really liked it. You made the action work out pretty smoothly. And I'm looking forward to reading more stories in the CyberPunk!Naruto scenario. Which means I'll be off to look on your profile now.