|Reviews for Citizen Erased|
| Moonwaterpetal 3/23/08 . chapter 1
Well, since I already kinda reviewed on the last one, I'm not gonna go into depth. You know what I thought about it! I just wanted to add another review to your story and I wanted to add it to my story alerts! -
| Livvy22 3/3/08 . chapter 1
I love this. You could make a story out of this if you wanted. Kinda like Xmen, you know? Get an antagonest and stuff. It would be good. Meh. Keep updating!
| ohthatsmyname 2/26/08 . chapter 1
that was like the sweetest endings i've ever read
| Caelum Isleen 2/26/08 . chapter 1
Awesome story. I really like how you re-invented Naruto world in such an addicting way. Everything just fits perfectly! Good job :)
| the tomato 2/24/08 . chapter 1
this is really cool i like it!sasusaku for ever love the outfits darling esp naruto's old dj headphones
| Neon Genesis 2/24/08 . chapter 1
Very cool. Update soon, please!
| Cabbit and the Weasel 2/23/08 . chapter 1
| imanokie01 2/23/08 . chapter 1
This was awesome. I love the humor and the arc. Just a really engaging story. I like your Sasuke, I hate emo Sasuke he just bugs me. Now I am off to read and review more of your stuff. :)
| snappleducated 2/22/08 . chapter 1
That was wicked brilliant-loved the cyberpunk!urban-ness of it all. And, eep, I really, really just love the concept, not to mention that it was gorgeously written. Well done.
| Laura-chan 2/20/08 . chapter 1
As I said on lj, I loved it :D Awesome plot and setting, so original and the SasuSaku interaction is so sweet _ I love it!
Just watch out for a few typos (like "had" instead of "hand", "fatiuge" istead of "fatigue" and so on).
| Miko-chan 2/19/08 . chapter 1
This only have a couple of reviews? WHAT? Hmm, I guess it's maybe because the daunting amount of text is very intimidating to the readers, but still, this fanfic is very pretty.
XD I'm going to expect something more from this. I hope that the fic will still continue. XDD This is a very lovely creation. _
(I think I will try to pimp this fic out. It's worth to give a shot.)
Update and this is a very well-written fanfic! X3
| loveforspeed 2/17/08 . chapter 1
u have got 2 continue! i heart your fic so far! XD
| SE Uchiha 2/17/08 . chapter 1
Wonderful job on your first published fic. I can't wait to read more of your writing!
| Erendhyl 2/17/08 . chapter 1
That was really cool. Great job parodying the Naruto world. I hope you do make a sequel, or several.
| kerapal bubbles 2/16/08 . chapter 1
u. need. to. post. the. sequal. NOW!