Nice going Audrey! I don't actually know how ya did this, but it's nice... XD Anyways, i'm sorry that my review is short and late. But your story is cool and nice au. XD

hey audrey :) I finally got to read it! I'm so happy we get the day off tomorrow.. anyway, I really liked it. It was nice. I hope you continue it soon. Though it might take a bit long to finish.. Well, good luck? I guess :) i'm amazed at how you did it though. In manga, sometimes you need to see the drawing to know what it looks like, but here, you actually described it well? Just, poor An.. Like Tiffy said also, An, not Ann, but, it's up to you. Yeah, I dont like those little red lined in Word too. Haha. So yeah, I hope you continue it :) 'cause I enjoyed it. :) -sammy

That was really cool! please update soon! =] thank you!