LOL! I liked this chapter the best especially the Harry Potter glasses and black themed Edward Elric costume =D

This shouldn't be so funny.

BUT IT IS :O

I just remembered this story and I figured I should review and tell you sumfin...
A few weeks ago, this happened to me.
Find a buddy, feed her two slices of cake, three starbursts and a sip of spaz juice (IT EXISTS) then tie your wrist to hers with a three foot purple ribbon and attempt to swim.
...Funerals will result.
Anywho...I still like this story. And you're a bitch for not updating anything in so long. Bad Ayumi. You fail at life.
Ah...K, bye.

Wasn't L supposed to know a martial art called... wait, let me check... capoeira? You'd think he could just beat the living daylights out of the cashier girl. Unless, maybe... he liked it?
oh, and since you asked earlier, oficially, L is one fourth Japanese, one fourth Russian, one fourth either Spanish or French (i prefer to think French, and yes one fourth English. He was born and raised in England.

I don't know about that last part. Imean, full metal alchemist has some really gory stuff.

i love it! bwahahahahaaha it's so awesome! you should continue it!

wow. I can actually PICTURE L looking like that. makes him look less like an obsessive-compulsive.

Mad tattoo though, go the SHINY APPLE!
RAWR!

oh my god! all of this is SOO FREAKIN' FUNNY!
My most fave chap is the skittles one.

taste the rainbow - EAT CRAYONS!

To Ayumi Elric, from Juunshi
Your Deathnote fanfiction is really funny! I've been laughing the whole time I read the chapters. This seems to be one of your older fanfictions though, so I don't know if you'll say anthing when I say this, but...
I would like to draw your fanfiction into comic form. I have a drawing tablet that hooks up to my laptop, and I can draw on the computer. So yeah, I noticed that you wanted to make it doujinshi and I thought "oh cool! Maybe I could draw something funny!"
I'm not a professional artist or anything, I just enjoy drawing and I'm relatively good at it. (I think..XD) But if you're interested, I'll send you my version of chapter one of this fanfic.
Again, "Chains" is hilarious! I love all the situatiuons you put Raito and L in. Thanks for letting me ramble. XD
-Juunshi

luv the story, poor poor L. The cashier lady is... *shivers* Light (Raito?) sucks and his laugh scares the crap out of me. I keep laughing randomly when I reember things in this story, probably making the people around me think that I'm weird. Good job fitting Mello and Near into this so randomly!
Ps- The Dane Cook thing with the smelly markers or whatever made me laugh. A LOT. I told y friend that it was Dane Cook, but she didn't believe me. I was right!
Update, or else I'll tell Ryuk to kill you. (Bribing him is easy, as long as you have an apple.) Update. Update. UPDATE!

Hahahaha!hilarious!keep up the funnieness! xD

the awesomeness is awesome in itself XD if you don't write more i will sick my poptarts on you *evil stare* heheheheheheh raito sounds so gay!! XD! loved it!

i think i just fell out of my chair...again...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH (etc. etc.) heh that was awesome.

heheheheheh. yay! good great awesome awesometastical. hehehhehehehehehe. *falls off chair*

nice L fangirl images... but somehow Ed is there aswell. m whipped cream.

this is so hilariously funny! ...but i dont think that its a good thing that this is the first Death Note fic i have ever read... ... ... o.o

ed's.angel xoxo