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Reviews for: The shadow of her heart
Leyton-equals-TrueLoveAlways
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
that was good. lucas is so in the wrong at the moment. he is being cruel and single minded(she NEVER said no lucas!) I really feel for Peyton whereas lucas is just a cruel **!
AJeff
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Such a sad oneshot. I can feel her pain.
GreenLeoFiend
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Good story. Lucas was basically acting like a nineteen-year old boy trapped in the broken heart disease. I am a Leyton shipper like yourself, but Lindsay is kinda caught in the horrible rebound position. Nanny Carrie though, yeah, what a... [character]...

2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Great chapter. Such angst. Her poor broken heart.
M'sOTPisLP
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
oh i agree on you with so many levels! first lemme say awesome oneshot! it captured all of it! secondly haley is fustrating the crap out of me! nathan?? wth defend peyton! Luke...ooh dont get me started on him he is such an ** right now! the only one out of the gang that i still love is Peyton and of course Brooke coz they are bffs! even if Brooke likes Lindsay she still knows she will never win:D it'll always be Peyton!

anyway so theres my vent for the day haha...anyway again good fic!
sariannaluvsjake2
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Aw...that was so sad, I think I'm crying! But seriously really well done! I liked the flashbacks.

Sequel?
vaguely amused
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Did you know you're not accepting anonymous reviews? Anyway, to a certain extent it's true that Peyton didn't say no, and this definitely made me see her side more. If I wasn't so irritated with the two of them for stringing Lindsey along, I might actually buy into Peyton being the victim here. So congrats for that.
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