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Kurosu
2009-07-16 . chapter 3
lol, I'm glad you wrote about the chase instead. Very entertaining! =) That last line is a classic. =P
Kurosu
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
Wow, that was a nice start. You had me hooked from the start, lol. I love how possessive Toushiro is and how he treats Rukia, and she's so cute being oblivious! =D I can't wait to read the rest!
trace4444
2009-05-06 . chapter 2
the pin is really pretty
phoenixfire3473
2008-12-10 . chapter 3
it was so adorable! who knew shirou was such a perv but it was awsome!

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ViperineVampire
2008-09-22 . chapter 3
HAHAHA!this story is just too cute!and i feel like buying that rabbit pin now!
Sweet Scrifice
2008-07-04 . chapter 3
So CUTE! I simply love how you made look hitsugaya as a possesive, naughty dragon ^_^ The sentece about the pigs growing wong was so cool! When Rukia stabbed Renji and he started laughing a seriously thought he was high XP Anyway you did a brillint job!
wickedsistah1024
2008-05-25 . chapter 3
Aww. That was so funny but so cut, too! As much as I want more, I know you couldn’t give in to my request. Sigh. I’ll be waiting for new HitsuRuki fics from you, though. Take care! :)
youshallnotpass
2008-05-15 . chapter 3
Fabulously engaging story! Great job-really. One of the best things I have read in a while. Thank you for writing.
Prince cl0ud9
2008-05-14 . chapter 3
AHAHAHA!
That was funny!!
I loved it!
Totally awesome:)
DarkSmile
2008-05-14 . chapter 3
omgerz O.O any other girl would be like Toushirou keep those pants off lolz *insert perverted grin here* lolzers
CrazyOnDisplay
2008-05-12 . chapter 3
HOORAY! A third chapter-ish/epilogue thingy! WHOO HOO! I knew it would come sometime!

OMG, I loved it! It was so possessive and funny and cute! What a great combination! Oh I adore this ficlet so much! And Rukia sleeping with a little chappy bunny, cute! Plus we all must admit that we do it, lol!

But out of it all (which is absolutely amazing and brilliant by the way), I have to admit that the ending was the best and most funniest part of it all! Hahaha, of coarse Hitsu-chan would think of something as...er...daring as that I guess you could say!

And yes, I do believe that they spent some..uh...physical and quality time together that night *wink wink*!

Well StormDragon6, you did it again! Another amazing chapter!

I love it so much, and can't wait to hear more from you! Take care!
Hiroen Nnir
2008-05-12 . chapter 3
aw!
this was so cute!
Toushiro REALLY REALLY loves Rukia!
and Rukia now knows just how much!
and by the way, i'm your reviewer
white tiger...
just a heads up!
can't wait to read more of your stories!
Iana Sabelle
2008-05-12 . chapter 3
Followed your advise... I kept myself from melting (took a lot from me)...

Uhm... can I see that random dream of Rukia, with the elephant?LOL

What the?! Hahahaha! I love this story! It was worth the wait!

You're so naughty with the way you ended this... Nicely written. Congratulations!^_^
BlackBelt
2008-05-12 . chapter 3
Ok...I hate computers. Seriously. Somehow I got logged off and didn't realize it and the long review I sent you has no name. Sorry!!

But as I said down below this was one best HitsuRuki fic I have read.

2008-05-12 . chapter 3
Ok...I have to tell you I nearly screamed in happiness when I saw this received a third chapter when I had beleived there was only going to be two.

I. Loved. This. Thing.

It is just one of the best HitsuRuki fics here!! I mean, wow!!

And I love Hitsugaya in this! (of course) He seems obbessivly in love with her, not just possessivly/protectivly and that is just great! You did an amazing job with that!!

(nosebleed) Hitsugaya licking his lips--how Rukia can remaining concious after seeing that is beyond me. She is a very strong-willed girl.

Hunter-Hitsugaya is friggen hot.

Man he just goes coo-coo looking for her!! You did just an absolute AMAZING job! I cannot stress this enough (it appears I kinda suck at giving reviews/compliments...sorry, you deserve more)

God this was just amazing! Hitsugaya was wonderfully possessive and territorial over his cute rabbit!! And evil Little Toushirou has some lovin plans this night I take it? Muwhahaha!! And even Byakuya was in on it!!

This was just...breathtakingly good!! I just adored this story and this chapter espically.

I can't wait to read more from you!

(P.S. Those were some creepy-ass dreams you had!!)
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