 Jan Lee 2008-03-01 . chapter 1That was hiLARious! I loved the part with all the tranq darts flying all over the place...and the secret love harbored by Anissina and Gwendal? Completely believable. You portrayed everyone really well. However, I did pick out a few minor errors with grammar. If you want to know, wing me off an email. Otherwise, this was a funny fic, and I enjoyed reading it immensely. Especially with Adalbert's declaration of love, and calling Anissina 'my darling' and everything. Good work and thank you for posting.
~JL |