--snickering--
I love these Mary-sue killing fics...
--more snickering--
Yes! Continue! Continue for your life!
And maybe...you could...just perhaps...work up to...LxOC romance?
Um, hehe...well...yeah.
Ja ne!

Aniki

I must be blind for not noticing this story. x.-

Great job; I love it. x3 Totally wanting to see more, but I can wait.

better as a one-shot. Well done.

oh my god. you must continue this. this is hilarious! i love all the fangirls and their downfalls, and Akemi's pretty much taking this all in stride. I'd be so confused...

well, if you do plan on continuing, i hope you update soon...and so far, i'm liking this with no real pairing. friendship is looking good though.

I think it's a great idea. :) I do hope you continue it. I love L, but I'm going to try not to invent some kind of "kawaii" Mary-Sue.

omg
*Worships you*
Finally, someone does a Sue parody! DN has been in dire need of one lately!
Keep up the good work!

I think this is a very good idea and you should keep going with it! It was hillarious! Plz keep up the good work! Luvers you!!

--SAYURI--

Well, in spite of the fact that the only stuff I know about Death Note I learned from my cousin, I found this to be good. Granted, I don't really know who L is, though I do know who Light is. In any case, I liked it so far, and I have no problems in reading a fanfic for a fandom I know next to nothing about. It won't be the first time, and probably not the last, either.

I'd say you should continue it. It just seems unfinished if you left it here. I'd love to see more. Maybe I'll ask my cousin if I can borrow some of his copies of the Death Note manga...

You should continue this; it's VERY amusing to read. Seriously.

An invasion of OC's, Mary-Sues, and bad characters altogether. Poor L better be afraid for his life with THESE people...Just glad he didn't get found by that mob. THAT would have ended badly for the eccentric detective. -,-

Lol, Bright getting run over by a car. L's solution to the problem was amusing too!

You'd think L would wonder why so many people know who he is...Oh well. Just as long as the 'fans' don't reveal to anyone what his name really is, then I guess he'd be okay. Hopefully.

This is a fresh breath from all the yaoi I've seen on the Death Note archive, and seemed to be written by a competent person. I hope that you'll continue, I'd like to see what happens next!