Excellent but too short. :)

YEAH! Now all that's left is to pick up the pieces and return to Zi. The Alliance has fallen...the Blue Sun system is free.

*in shock* Saffron...Jayne...huh?

I see Jayne is no longer single. No all they need to do is figure out a way to restore River's reproductive capability and their set. Although I have a feeling that you aren't going to do that.

You do know that Khan is going to get you for that, right? I suspect that from hell's heart, he shall grapple with thee.

The last few chapters have had some outstanding ship-to-ship battle sequences with a level of detail rarely seen.

OTOH, this is supposed to be a crossover and is posted in the FIREFLY fandom. It's turned into 90% Battlestar. Sure would be nice to see some actual Firefly in a story in the Firefly fandom.

Hint, hint.

Wonder how they are going to get out of this one.

I KNEW IT! I knew there'd be a black hole. :)

DAAMM now that was straight inspiration from teh Wrath of Khan.. lol damm good work..

Nice takeoff on the Wrath of Kahn, keep it going.

Oh Frack me...Achilles...I hope you have a plan.

Good ship to ship battle...keep up the good work.

I'm guessing those crystals are somewhat like that crystal tree thing from Star Trek? As for the battle, I'm so mad right now I could kill. All those brave people, gone.

Hey DR:

Another good chapter. I really enjoyed the space battle between the Thunderchild and the Dreadnaught. Too bad the Fury couldnt be more use, though couldnt the CPC be used in space? (Didnt Hiltz use the CPC on the Death Stinger when they were in orbit around Zi? Actually I just checked my DVD's and he did in ep 58 of Chaotic Century "Attack of the Winged Dragons")

Anyway great chapter, cant wait to read more.

Oh man, it's like Star Trek II here! I'm guessin' that's where you got the idea from too.