i decided to submit a review for the 5 chapters up so far. i dont like the way they treat keiko at all. im happy ritsuko got in trouble. :D

WOW that rocked! Hey I was just wondering, will you put Tsunade and Jiraiya in the story. Cause when I read the chapter where Keiko tried to run away and Mr. Jerkwad smacked her I was thinking 'Why can't Tsuande show up and kick his azz for slapping HER daughter' that would have been so awesome if Mr. D.A. got hit! That's just a thought! But if you make Tsunade kill Mr. Jacknut that would be great! Well I LOVE the story especailly the one where Ritsuko got in trouble. Finally Mr and Mrs. Stupid did the right thing. (Sorry for insulting them but they are so stupid and so mean to poor little Keiko)