This is a really great fic! I love it. I noticed that you haven't updated in about a year and that the story does seem to have an end. But I want to know more in the story, meet the dog, see if Wilson and Cuddy get together, etc. let me know either way. Great Job

Wow long time no update in a good story. Here is hoping you update.

I'm loving your story so far. I love having a nice long House/Chase fic to sit down and read after a long day.

I must say though, I've been having to suspend some serious disbelief over these last few chapters. I find it extremely had to believe that Blythe (or any women in similar circumstances) would go to jail for what she did. I mean interfering with a witness? Do people really go to jail for that? I doubt it, unless threat of bodily harm was involved.

As it happens, I'm pretty sure New Jersey has no statute of limitations on child abuse. However, I highly doubt any jury would convict a seventy year old women of complicity in allowing her husband to abuse her child thirty years ago. Even if Blythe wasn't abused herself (which, I have to believe would put an end to the possibility of a trial. Battered wife syndrome and all). I'm just... finding it all a bit hard to swallow.

Anyway! I really do like this fic a lot. Especially the House and Chase friendship slowly growing in to something more. It's so cute, and it seems very genuine, and I love it!

This is by far one of the most in-character slash-fic I have ever read. The build up to the relationship was slow, tantalizing, and utterly convincing. I wonder how much of House's family is canon and how much is OC because I honestly can't tell a difference in your fic. It's lovely, lovely and well worth the fav. Bravisimo! Now, I must wash dishes.

This was wonderful! Just what I was looking for! Your story kept me completely absorbed and intrested. I do hope you pick up this story again soon! Please!

Wow. I just spent the past three days of my life reading this humongous piece of fanfiction, and what a happy three days they were! :) This story is absolutely fantastic! It's astounding how believable and IC your House and Chase are, considering that this story focuses so much on them. So are all your other characters as well, including House's extended family. I must say, when I first came across Turner, I pretty much despised him because he seemed to be a cross between House and Tritter until that scene in which he persuades House to find out Chase's underlying condition, and the ferocious argument they have over his wife's death. That scene got to me so much! It says a lot about your skills as a writer that a character you created is fleshed out so well and has so many nuances and layers. Your OCs like Lee, and Aunt Sarah are really funny and nicely characterized as well, and I think you've got a great grasp of Blythe and John, from the little we've seen of them in the show. Loved your actual pre-characterized interactions between House, Chase, Foreman, Wilson, Cuddy and Cameron too, because they were all great and reminded me so much of the show. I'm also glad, by the way, that you didn't include any of the new team - I'm still not quite over my grudge of letting the Ducklings go in the first place, I guess. =)

A bit of constructive criticism because I think that every good review should have one - I've noticed that throughout the story you use double letters to place emphasis during dialogue, such as 'you' and 'right'. While in my head I can hear the characters saying it just like that - especially Cuddy and Wilson, hee - it'd probably be better to use italics for this purpose. Just a suggestion, because I know everyone has their own writing style and this is probably yours. But italicizing does generally convey the same amount of emphasis during speech, and is a given standard on the internet. The choice is yours, of course. I'd still read the story anyway because it's just so damned good. :D Also, there are hardly any spelling erros in the story which is great because they tend to annoy the heck out of me. I did notice sentence fragments every once in a while however, especially in the first half of the fic. No other grammatical errors really caught my eye, which is a massive feat considering how big and detailed the story is. Excellent job with that!

Just a funny note I wanted to add - when I first started reading the story, I was pretty much convinced that you're a doctor, or at least some kind of medical expert. Then I moved on to thinking that you're probably a rehabilitation expert, or a physical therapist or something of the sort, considering how well you write the post-surgical recovery process etc. Then as we moved on to the trial, I couldn't help thinking you're a lawyer! :D Now I think that you could probably be any of the three and just damn good at researching stuff! Your hard work into the story really, really shows. Great job!

Anyway, the whole point of my rambling is to say that I've totally joined the band of fans following this story, and am looking forward to finishing the ride. Hence, there's only one logical request I could have right now - update soon! :)

"We're putting it in Wilson's briefcase."


lol that was funny

yay! tacos!1

oh burn!

aw...touching!

aw...do i sense a bromance with bad intentions?

oh burn! what would chasey say?!

aw...how sweet!1

aw...poor poor chasey!

omg...r u gonna kill him?!