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Susan82 2008-08-10 ch 10,	abuseIt's funny. Your note at the end of the story was a small part of why I haven't been to the site at all in almost a year. With a few exceptions, this season was a bit...grim. And the fics have been, well... Anyways, onto the review. A nice, tidy ending. Bobby saves the day in the nick of time, and the brothers are once again ok, and closer than ever. Loved Bobby's awkward explaination of why he was still picking clovers. With the exception of Dream a Little Dream (horrible episode in my opinion) Bobby has never really shown any errors in judgement. It was fun to see him fallible. Sammy's all better. The sick, twisted Limp!Sam part of me was a little bummed that all his ills had been fixed, but the rational part of me was happy Dean made that exact wish. The epilogue was very well executed. The apologies, the unspoken love, and the goodnatured ribbing were perfectly blended. The last line was great, as well. Always good to end on a laugh. A few chapters ago you apologized for this story, that it wasn't your usual fare. Yeah, so? You've done comedic stories before, just as the normally dark show has done it's funny episodes. Never apologize for your work. It's your vision, and your right to create it however you darn well please. Ok, lecture over. =) Besides which, this story kicked butt! I really enjoyed this story, and I hope Tyranusfan did, too. Great job, my friend!
Susan82 2008-08-10 ch 9,	abuseI keep forgetting to comment on something. I love the effort and detail you put in when you're writing in Bobby's POV. I don't recall if the show ever said where he's from, but he definitely has a very distictive and southern way of speaking. Lines like this =The kid was kin to two of the orneriest hunters Bobby had ever had the pleasure of whelping.= show how much you care and value the show and its characters. Plus, it makes me smile to read the words "orneriest" and "whelping". =) Concussed Dean and Dopey Sam. Can't wait for the conversations these two'll have. Once Bobby obtains another clover, that is. I also loved the visual of Bobby full out tackling Sam. lol You are the master of cliffhangers, my friend. It took all my effort not go to on to the next chapter before reviewing. But now that I have reviewed...
Susan82 2008-08-10 ch 8,	abuseHurt AND stoned Sam. Phx, I could kiss you! Sam trying to change the weather was cute, but his little singsongy "She loves me" was priceless, and had me out of my mind laughing. Then when Bobby inadvertantly wished him mute, I was done. I had to step away from the computer for a second. lol My heart sunk during Dean's fateful car ride. I was glad to see him finally see the light, and to stick up for Sam. But at the same time I kept wishing (no clovers in sight) for him to shut the heck up! My heart raced along with the speedometer. I would hope KATT wouldn't do anything that could damage herself, or as Bobby would say..."itself", but that thing's bonkers. Here's hoping Sam's not the only one to suffer from a hit and run.
Susan82 2008-08-10 ch 6,	abuseSorry for all the reviews. Your poor inbox! I keep intending to just plow through, but if I held all my thoughts in for a few chapters, I'd break the world record for the longest review! Sam flying over the hood of the Impala with Bobby in his big ol' honkin' tow truck racing towards them...now that's a cool visual. I wish Kripke could film something like this. I'd love to see it actualized. Bobby to the rescue! Normally I'd want Dean to fly in and save the day, but given that I'm a bit p.o.ed at him for not seeing what's really going on, I'm actually glad it was Bobby who got to tend to Sam. And being a fan of Limp!Sam, I have to thank you for those glorious Hurt!Sam moments. His poor wrist! Dean as a eunuch. Now there's a visual I really didn't need!
Susan82 2008-08-10 ch 5,	abuseHoly cow! She's going to run him over after all! Maybe. As much as I wanted...needed to push that little purple button on the right side of the page to go to the next chapter, I had to push the left one first and leave a quick (well, quick for me) review. I loved going into Dean's head as he searched and found his prey. It seems out guy isn't quite as confident inwardly as he is outwardly. =Please let her be willing… please let her be willing… = =Her name was… like he really cared = lol Man, KATT is truly insane. Of course, I don't really have a scale to measure her on, given my lack of experience in talking cars. But, wow, she really kicked Sam's butt, and was a little too gleeful while doing it. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to see how this odd western standoff ends!
Susan82 2008-08-10 ch 4,	abuseOk, whatever nice feelings I had for KATT flew away when she unceremoniously dumped Sam out of the car. And then that crap in the field...! I was banking that she'd either "accidentally" run him over, or try to choke him via exhaust fumes or seatbelt. Third one's a charm, I guess. That b*&%h! =Normally he loved talking about himself, not the real him of course, but the one he let other people see.= Well, if that isn't Dean to a T! It seems Dean's starting to slowly see the light, that maybe his wish isn't working out exactly the way he'd planned. But will he believe Sam when he tells Dean what happened with the seatbelt? That is, if Sam's able to. It's funny how one little word, "BOBBY" at the end of a dire situation can lift the spirits. Let's hope Bobby's calling from down the road and can save Sam!
Susan82 2008-08-10 ch 2,	abuseI was gong to try and go a few chapters before reviewing again, but this chapter was so funny I had to stop here. I'm not even going to touch on that weird Dean under the hood stuff. I managed to hold in most of my giggling until the dipstick part. lol I think you've invented a new genre...car **. ‘Why couldn’t I be soap?’ I think I'm beginning to like KATT. I'm glad you touched on the deal. I was wondering why Dean wouldn't just wish it away, but that certainly would seem like welching. I hope Bobby makes a physical appearance in this story, kick a little Winchester butt. =‘So, Sam, what’s your favorite color?’ = That did it. I was almost on the floor with that one. You must've had such a blast writing all of this fun Sam abuse. I love to see our boy whumped around as much as the next girl, but this mental talking car abuse is almost as sweet. I just hope things don't take a turn for the worse. Duh duh DUH!
Susan82 2008-08-10 ch 1,	abuseWow. I mean this in all the best possible ways, but, man...you are seriously whacked. lol Right from the outset - Dean searching for a four leaf clover - I knew I was in for a really interesting ride. KATT. lol Of course! Why wouldn't Dean want his baby to come to life? I have a feeling this is one of those stories that will make me glad I'm home alone. I'd hate to explain that the reason I was guffawing was because a car called Sam , "Sammy". And that he got mad about it. Awesome. Typical Winchester reactions here. Dean excited over something new, not seeing the potential danger while Sam is cautious as ever. Although this seems to be a third season story, this first chapter had rings of the first season for me, where things were a little more lighthearted. I wonder if the Impala, er...KATT will bring up the whole crowbar-to-the-trunk incident. I guess I'd better finish reading to find out! BTW : Loved Bobby's "Who died?" Ya gotta love Bobby!
AquarianNightSky 2008-07-25 ch 10,	abuseGood story Phx. You had me laughing with stoned Sammy. :-) Toodles! Sky
LastTrojanNight 2008-06-21 ch 10,	abuseIt’s been a long time since I’ve found anything that made me laugh this hard. So thanks! I definitely needed it. ..a car with the hots for Dean.. damnXD It was also very touching it places^.^ and scary!-bites nails- Made my day a little brighter;)
FeistyFeral 2008-06-18 ch 10,	abuseNo, it wasn’t, and started looking for the next clover.--I would have lost my mind right there and then at that realization. I'm not even kidding. Immediately his eyes sought out his brother and exhaled in relief when he made out the long lanky form sprawled out in the field. (Yeah, Sam seems like he'd be kinda hard to miss ;P) “Hey, Bobby,” Dean greeted as he crouched down next to his brother. His eyes appraised every bump, bruise and swollen part even as he continued addressing the older man.--Typical Dean...I love it!...Well...Jensen/Dean is more like it. ;P With a curt nod, Bobby passed Dean a small flashlight and the two men started picking flowers. (Why didn't they just use the Impala? Men...) “Hey, Sammy,” Dean sounded way to chipper. Probably concussed then. “How you feeling?”--I like how they gauge each other's injuries through behaviour...or more accurately, moods. =P And he did. He got his little brother back, just the way Sam was two days ago.--Aww! Loving that! “I know your baby would never do anything to hurt me.”--OOH! OUH! That must have really hurt Sam to say... The younger man fought to keep the fond smile from his face. He was loved…(he always was and always will be...) “Only if you’ll let me drive your car…” and returned it, ten-fold. “Shaddup. **.” He didn’t even miss a beat. “Jerk.”--=D The classic Winchester saying between the brothers! Yep, absolutely freakin’ Winchester normal.-lol! I liked this line! It's seems rather fitting, no? Until Dean absently wondered if leprechauns really did have pots of gold.--Oh God! NO! JUST SAY NO! The End This was a pretty great story! I liked the creativity, use of language, character development and banter! I had a great time reading it! Excellent work! - About being depressed in regards to this season, I thought the same thing in the beginning, until I realized that (at least in my mind) if Dea had gotten out of his deal it would have been like a cop-out. I'm not happy in the least that Dean actually went to Hell, but I think it was a necessary evil (pardon the pun). Hang in there and great work on this story! =D
FeistyFeral 2008-06-17 ch 9,	abuseAnd then everything came back to him in a rush and he sat up, groaned and promptly threw up. In his car. Oh man.--Ugh! In his baby? He's not going to be impressed when he has to clean that up! the tam tam drums in his head were merciless. Mental note to self: Kill the drummer.--I really like that line!...could I borrow it for a story sometim? For a long moment the car didn’t say anything and just when Dean was sure she’s wasn’t going to, she whispered, ‘Together…’--For some reason Ihave Thelma and Louise in my head...
FeistyFeral 2008-06-17 ch 8,	abuseIt was like the damn thing was possessed. Inwardly he groaned. Why was he surprised? It was a Winchester after all.--Ah, so true! The Winchesters do tend to have Murphy's Luck... The double glazed glare suddenly went alarmingly wet. “Oh for the love of God,” Bobby sputtered. “No crying!”--I can imagine Bobby (who stares down demons, ghosts, and the like with distain and not much else) in full fledged panic mode at the first sign of tears. Bobby scrubbed a hand across his face and wondered how the hell John Winchester had lived as long as he did.--i'm sure a lot of people have had that exact same thought at one point or another. ‘No offence, but I think your job sucks.’--There are a few things in Dean's life you don't mess with: Sammy, family & friends, the Impala and hunting. 'She's' managed to hit all three in one night. Yatzee. “Sam?” Bobby groaned as he looked up towards the tow truck and didn’t see the kid sitting in the passenger seat… (of course not!) where he was supposed to be.Winchesters were never ones to sit on their asses when someone needed their help; especially when that someone was one of their own --Case and point: when Dean was dying after the season finale of season...one? Next to him, Sam broke into a rousing rendition of ‘she loves me, she loves me not’ and started picking flowers.--Okay, really?! This just keeps getting better and better. I mean 'she loves me, she loves me not'? Brilliant. I may be in a strange mood because I'm not usually a fan of limpSam, but I think it's your writing style, it's hilarious! Bobby was ready to kill him.--oh yeah, I can only imagine how many different people are scrambling to begin the cannonization process for Bobby. He is a saint! “She loves me. She loves me not! Hey, Bobby, she loves me!”--He found one! “Oh for Pete’s Sake, Sam,” he couldn’t take it anymore. “I wish you’d just shut the hell up!” And Sam did, mid word.--Oh no...not even! He was holding a clover. A four-leaf clover. Oh crap.--You can say that again! Sam was mute.--Great... This just kept getting better and better…--I'm almost afraind to ask what else could possibly go wrong for them...
FeistyFeral 2008-06-17 ch 7,	abuse‘Sonnavabitch!’--I love it when Dean says that really quickly. Like in 'Bad Day at Black Rock' at the end when he realizes Bella stole the scratch tickets from him... the glove box – the state of which would have made Dean proud – and rifled through its contents.--How do you mean? Today it just sucked to be him.-And the award for 'Understatement of the Year' goes to...Sam Winchester ;) KATT had tried to kill Sam. His Sammy.--'His Sammy' like that. Yes, it's possessive, but Dean's always been possessive of Sam; this has tenderness intertwined within it. ‘Oh, yeah…’ his brother sounded… stoned.--Ahahaha! That's something I'd pay to see. For some reason it sounds like a hell of a great time! In the background, Dean heard his brother mutter something about grapefruits and grimaced. Stoned Sam was downright scary…--ha ha ha...aw! “Find the flower, Bobby… but hurry.” Dean was brusque as white-hot anger coursed through his veins. (That was one of the Impala's biggest mistakes; trying to kill Sammy and failing while leaving a witness: Bobby. 'She' should know beter...a lot better.) “I’m not sure how long I’ll be able to ‘play nice’.” Pocketing his phone, the hunter set his shoulders, sucked in a calming breath and slapped a fake smile on his face. It was show time. This was a funny chapter...stoned Sam made me laugh a lot...I'm still smirking.
FeistyFeral 2008-06-17 ch 6,	abuseI fell down a supernatural rabbit hole. That's the only way to excuse my tardiness. My apologies!! Sam cried out as the bone in one of his wrists snapped (Ouch!!

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