Reviews for One full year on tour!

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'The Lurking Lurker' 2008-06-07 ch 1,	abuseYou should just stop. I mean seriously. This isn't really a story. I mean, you don't anyone, any songs...anything really. I don't know why Miley (who is a by the way) is talking to herself in chatspeak. Is she talking to herself in chatspeak? She's a loony now? Wow... You already know nothing is spelt right, capitalized right...Then why don't you ** change them? Pathetic... Signed, DPMOA
otherrealmwriter 2008-06-05 ch 1,	abuseNow I don't know the fandom or such but I agree with Ria-Dancer Girl on FR. This isn't the best but it is a good starter fic. You gotta just read and write more to get better. Flame Rising has no life and a lot of his "followers" don't either. So ignore his but pay attention to Belle and Beast's review. That one is helpful and getting ones like that are good. Keep writing.
Belle and Beast 2008-06-05 ch 1,	abuseBeachbaby023, I'm sorry to say that your story isn't good. I'd say it's bad. Horrible, actually. But I wouldn't say it was a castostrophic piece of **. Your mistakes are as follows: Grammatically: No quotes. That's a major no-no. Abbrievietations every other line: OMG or OMJ. (What does OMJ mean?) Half the story is a song. Now, for the story... It is normal for two fourteen year old girls to be gone for a year? The story makes NO sense, since there are no quotes. The characters are very 2-D. Is Emily supposed to be Lilly? Again, half the story is song... I hope your ability to write stories improves! -Belle P.S. You forgot to add the Jonas Brothers and the Cyrus family in your disclamer. Does this mean you own them?
nileyfan88 2008-06-04 ch 12,	abuseomg please update son
XOXzanessaXnileyXOX 2008-06-04 ch 12,	abuseaw...i luved how joe asked her 4 advice
XOXzanessaXnileyXOX 2008-05-31 ch 11,	abuseyayy! i luvs it!
nileyfan88 2008-05-31 ch 11,	abuseomg please update soon
Ria-Dancer Girl 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuseHmm... I didn't actually read the story, I read just the reviews so I don't know if its good or not. Sorry. I was wondering, why isn't it in the Hannah Montana section? But on to the real reason I wrote this review... a reviewer called "Flame Rising"... (now I'm scared, :-Z) Okay, seriously I know everyone's not perfect and everbody's entitled to their own opinion, and I know I don't know the 'real' you or anything, but on FanFic... YOU ARE A BTCH. I'm not being mean, it's the truth. I know I'm not a great writer or anything, but you've never written a story, so my guess is that you SUCK at writing. Do you like making people miserable? Do you even have a real personality? Because you seem like a major fake-@ss. Sorry for being so honest, or you call me blunt, I freaking don't care. If you don't like the story, stop reading it and don't waste your time even reviewing it, because you make yourself sound totally stupid and like a major computer nerd with no friends... which may be true, or not, I don't care. So, sorry for this review, but when people * me off I get a little... angry, even tough I try to tone it down in reviews, I'm a lot more ** in real life. Thanks for reading, or for not reading, whatever. Have a nice life... "Flame Rising". Mwah, kisses from Ria!
Flame Rising 2008-05-23 ch 1,	abuseLet’s play a game, shall we? Yes? Fantastic. This game is called “Things That Can Write Better Than You”. The rules are simple. Please correctly select which choice can write better than you: A. My left testicle B. A toilet-full of chunky diarrhea C. An inbred midget clown who swims in choice B D. All of the above If you chose the correct answer, D, then you have won the following prize: A spot in my coveted C2 “Stories A Turd Out of My ** Could Write Better” (which, strangely enough was not one of the choices). Don’t despair! Even if you didn’t choose correctly, I will be kind enough to give you that prize anyway. Who said I don’t have a heart? Congratulations! Please continue to avoid the dictionary as if it were an oozing, puss-filled sore on an old hooker’s a.s.s. And good grammar? Well, run away from it like it’s a festering syphilitic itch you just can’t scratch in public. Or in words you can understand: your fic sucks donkey balls, and that’s what you wanted me to think, right? Because otherwise, I’d have to believe this was an actual attempt at writing and laugh the crap right out of myself. Best regards, F/R
XOXzanessaXnileyXOX 2008-05-15 ch 10,	abuseaww..that's sad
nileyfan88 2008-05-15 ch 10,	abuseanother great chapter please post more soon
nileyfan88 2008-05-14 ch 9,	abuseOmg that was amazing please update soon thanks
XOXzanessaXnileyXOX 2008-05-14 ch 9,	abuseaww..that's sad..stupid nick..i luv it tho
XOXzanessaXnileyXOX 2008-05-03 ch 8,	abusei luv itt
XOXzanessaXnileyXOX 2008-04-01 ch 7,	abuseaww.i luv it

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