No it ended already D: This was really sweet, I'm glad Amelia didn't get all "Oh noes" over it in this fic xD and not much Angst, yes! There's too many angst fics out there. Write more :3

This is AWSOME! Please continue! Arrigato!

Love it!

Good .

very good xel/zel for your first try. it did end a little to abruptly. please say you'll continue it! *smiles mazokistically* MORE! *pouts slightly* please...

WWWaaaa! was that it? damn the man...I was hoping to see more. oh well...it was so great. by the way what does Namagomi mean? that word isn't in my vocab yet.

funny,but the x/z coupling is bothering me

I liked it very much! I've never read a Xell/Zel fic before... actually, I've never read a Slayers fic before, but this looked interesting and I enjoyed it.

aww that was soo sweet. so nice to see a Xel/Zel ihat isn't all bondage and touture...not that I don't like bondage and touture hehe.

Awwww. Cute! I liked it!

That's so grande! I love it lots! Can I put it on mai webshrine? email me!

Sweet! -

Oh well... I really liked it Some Japanese parts were a bit too much, but I like Xelloss' talks here and his speech about Ma/Shinzoku. It's actually completely correct, I mean, the comparison thing. It really was nice Erm... L-sama... Lord of Nightmares, right?