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| Prongs 2008-07-26 ch 12, anon. | abuseGREAT chapter, Alastor was exactly who I believe him to be, hard, cold, calculating, and hurt someone he cares for and you will pray to see Satan before you see him again. Harry is fast becoming, if he isn't already, the same way. As long as you are honest and play by the rules, even if he doesn't like you, he's a stand up guy. Purposefully hurt someone he cares for, and Satan would run screaming from him, much like myself if my nephews or my "little-big-sister" (older, but quite a bit smaller) is threatened, and don't even get me started on my g/f and my mom... Can't wait for more! |
| selenepotter 2008-07-25 ch 12,  | abuseIs there more? I would have like to have seen the original idea fleashed out with several girls facing their fate. |
| vis pour hp 2008-07-25 ch 12, | abuseThis chapter was bril! it was pure perfection, I wish it would have gone on longer |
| soggy_pancakes@msn.com 2008-07-25 ch 12, anon. | abuse5 stars!! Excellent chapter of an excellent story. your writing is rich and colorful. I especially enjoy your subtle and clever humor. Thanks a ton for writing this story. |
| Ella1331 2008-07-25 ch 12, | abuseLovely chapter! I especially adored the Nev's come back. |
| BloodyRose622 2008-07-25 ch 12, | abuseGreat story! Thanks so much! |
| Bleedndreamz 2008-07-25 ch 12, | abuselol you know a interesting way to spin the story could have been they actually kidnap daphne and then watch the world go crazy as they kicked back for a bit and watched it with voldemort lolz |
| twistyguru 2008-07-25 ch 12, | abuseHa! Very enjoyable fight scene in the Wizengamot...I guess a shield designed to use with Dark Lords IS a bit...energetic...to be used with a 'normal' wizard. Oh, and how priceless: "I am Longbottom of Longbottom"...and you're NOT! foflmao Eagerly awaiting the next chapter... |
| madsloth 2008-07-25 ch 12, | abuseAnother Great Chapter, was cool how ya killed the count he got less then what he deserved, also Mr. Greengrass I guess revenge is a dish best served cold and Moody finally got his. Looking forward to more, as always |
| sas1331 2008-07-24 ch 12, | abusewhen you say that chapter 11 made people angry, i for one feel that i was certainly angry at how daphne, a character i have come to love, was treated. However, in developing the plot, clause 9 deliciously set up for a wonderful 12th chapter. Keep up the most excellent work, sas1331 |
| ranma hibiki 2008-07-24 ch 12, | abusetwas a good chapter ^_^ of course a random fun fact. almost every fic ive ever read has had the goblins willing to "help" the wizards for a fee...i wonder if the wizarding society really cares? xD hope you update soon! ^_^ |
| Firemane 2008-07-24 ch 12, | abuseI don't care what your critics say, I love your approach to the solving of the problem. Nothing like a little creative bribery :-) |
| Flaming Man of Iron 2008-07-24 ch 12, | abuseInteresting Story. :) |
| Momma Lici 2008-07-24 ch 12, | abuseOh...Well, alls well, that ends well. GO HARRY! |
| DramoSkye 2008-07-24 ch 12, | abuseI love your story. I didn't realize contracts were actually like that having to get pregnant beforehand like what if the contract was called off after you got pregnant than what, I find it quite interesting and intend to look into this myself. |